Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more accurate with tense, grammar and word order, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I received a small bicycle from my parents as a Christmas present around 2004, and my father spent several afternoons teaching me how to keep my balance and pedal safely. That helped me gain confidence and ride on my own within a few weeks.

Sugestão: State your opinion directly, then provide two specific reasons linked with connecting words. Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary (e.g., infrastructure, hazardous, not many people use bicycles). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I wouldn't say bikes are popular in my country. Because we lack proper cycling infrastructure such as bike lanes and safe crossings, riding is often hazardous, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars instead.

× I do, I remember that I won one bike from my parents at the Christmas on 2004 approximately and was like a small bike.

✓ I do, I remember that I won a bike from my parents at Christmas in about 2004, and it was a small bike.

The original sentence mixes present and past and has incorrect article and preposition use. 'Won' is past, so time expressions should match past: use 'in 2004' and 'about 2004' or 'in about 2004'. Use 'a bike' not 'one bike' in this context. Also add 'it' as subject for 'was'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct articles and prepositions.

× And my dad at that time, he teach me how to to ride on a bike like to keep the balance, you know.

✓ And my dad at that time, he taught me how to ride a bike, for example how to keep my balance.

The subject is third person singular ('my dad'), so the verb should be past tense 'taught' not 'teach'. Also remove duplicate 'to' and unnecessary preposition 'on'. Use 'ride a bike' and include 'my' for clarity: 'keep my balance'. Suggestion: use past tense for completed actions and correct verb forms for third person singular in past.

× I would say no because I don't think we have the real structure to people ride on bikes.

✓ I would say no because I don't think we have the proper infrastructure for people to ride bikes.

The phrase mixes structures and has incorrect noun choice and prepositions. Use 'infrastructure' instead of 'structure' and the preposition 'for' with an infinitive: 'for people to ride bikes'. Also use 'ride bikes' rather than 'ride on bikes'. Suggestion: choose correct noun and use 'for + infinitive' to express purpose or suitability.

× Like it's kind of dangerous to to ride a bike in my country.

✓ It is kind of dangerous to ride a bike in my country.

Double 'to' should be reduced to one. 'It's' is acceptable but clearer as 'It is'; the verb 'ride' follows 'to' (infinitive), not present participle. Suggestion: remove the duplicate 'to' and keep the infinitive 'to ride'.

× So I don't think people is really into ride bike in my country.

✓ So I don't think people are really into riding bikes in my country.

The subject 'people' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also use 'into' with a gerund: 'into riding', and plural 'bikes' fits general meaning. Suggestion: use 'are' with 'people' and use 'into + -ing' form plus plural noun for habitual actions.