Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, remove redundant words, and correct verb forms. Use one or two supporting details (e.g., who bought it, one memory) and a linking phrase if needed. Avoid hesitations and self-corrections during the answer.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a green bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me and taught me how to ride it, and I remember feeling proud when I could cycle without training wheels.

Sugestão: Answer directly, reduce hesitations, and use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Start with a topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and a linking word (for example or because). Use precise terms (e.g., commuting, children, adults) and correct collocations (popular, used for commuting).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting. For example, I often see adults riding to work and children cycling to school, especially in residential areas.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a green bike that my father bought it for me and he taught how can I drive it? How can I sorry, ride it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a green bike that my father bought for me and he taught me how to ride it.

Multiple problems: unnecessary object pronoun 'it' after 'bought' (redundant) and incorrect word order in the reported action 'taught how can I drive it' which mixes direct question form with statement. This is a past-tense context, so use past simple 'bought' and 'taught' and use the correct reporting structure 'taught me how to ride it' (subject + taught + object + infinitive with to). Remove the extra 'it' after 'bought' and replace the question form with the infinitive phrase. Suggestion: practice reported questions and reporting verbs (teach) by forming 'taught me how to + base verb.'

× Yes, I think, uh, there are so popular because when I go out, I see a lot of people, umm, adult or child, uh, they have a bike for transferring.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular because when I go out I see a lot of people, adults or children, who have bikes for transportation.

Several issues: 'there are so popular' is incorrect — 'there' with 'are' is not needed and 'so popular' is informal and awkward here; use a subject pronoun 'they' and 'very popular' (adverb modifying adjective). 'Adult or child' should be plural 'adults or children' to match 'a lot of people' and correct noun forms. 'They have a bike for transferring' is unnatural: 'have bikes for transportation' or 'use bikes to get around' is correct. Also add a relative clause 'who have bikes' to connect 'people' and the description. Suggestion: ensure subject pronouns match and use plural noun forms; choose appropriate adverbs (very) and natural collocations (transportation, get around).