Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past forms), avoid repetitions, and add one or two specific details. Use linking words if adding details. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was seven. I rode it to school most days and sometimes used it to visit my friends in the neighborhood. Because it was small and light, I could easily keep it in our yard and ride it after homework.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and then explain with specific reasons. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. Motorbikes are more popular in my country because they are faster and cheaper to run than bicycles. For example, many people use scooters to commute to work since they can easily weave through traffic and park in small spaces.

× Yes, I I had to buy when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I bought one when I was seven years old.

The student used 'had to buy' which implies obligation rather than a past action of purchasing; also there is a duplicated 'I'. The correct simple past verb 'bought' is appropriate to describe a completed action in the past. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events and remove duplicate words.

× I used to go to school or go somewhere else.

✓ I used to go to school or to other places.

The original sentence is mostly understandable but 'go somewhere else' is informal and slightly awkward. Using 'to other places' fits better with 'used to' and makes the phrase parallel. 'Used to' + base verb is correct; keep the structure 'used to go'. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure and use clearer nouns for places.

× No, I think if a country's motorbike are more more.

✓ No, I think motorcycles are more common in some countries.

The original has subject-verb agreement problems: 'a country's motorbike are' mixes singular noun with plural verb. Also 'more more' is redundant. Use plural 'motorcycles' with plural verb 'are', and 'more common' expresses greater prevalence. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms and avoid repeated words.

× Popular done by because we can you multiply to go everywhere and is.

✓ They are popular because people can easily travel everywhere by motorbike.

This fragment is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Popular done by' and 'we can you multiply' are incorrect phrases. Rewriting the sentence clarifies the subject and reason: state that motorbikes are popular and explain why using correct word order and verbs. Suggestion: form a clear subject + verb + object structure and use appropriate adverbs ('easily') and prepositions ('by motorbike').