Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve accuracy, grammar and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g. 'parents', 'when I was five/young'), use linking words and keep to 3–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail to make the answer richer (e.g. how far school was or a memory).

Exemplo: Yes. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it to school every day because the school was only a ten-minute ride away. In the afternoons I liked cycling around the neighbourhood for exercise and to meet friends, which made me feel free and independent.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No) and support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar, use correct words ('many', 'motorbikes', 'cars') and avoid unfinished phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. In my country most people prefer motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. However, bicycles are becoming more common in parks and among students who want to save money or exercise.

× My parent bought me a bicycle when I was dry and I used to ride to school every day.

✓ My parents bought me a bicycle when I was three and I used to ride it to school every day.

'Parent' is singular but context implies both or at least more natural to use plural 'parents' for this meaning (singular/plural issue). Also 'dry' is an incorrect word here—likely intended 'three' (number), which is not a grammar category from the list but the sentence contained a clear incorrect word; to keep focus on listed types, main correction addresses plurality and clarity. Additionally, 'ride to school' should specify the object 'it' after 'ride' when referring to the bicycle to avoid ambiguity. Suggestion: use 'parents' if referring to both, ensure number words are correct, and include the object pronoun 'it' after 'ride' when referring back to the bicycle.

× I also like riding around the neighborhood in the afternoon because it was fun and give me freedom.

✓ I also liked riding around the neighborhood in the afternoon because it was fun and gave me freedom.

Tense consistency error: the student is speaking about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Like' and 'give' are present tense forms; when describing past habits, use past forms 'liked' and 'gave'. The problem maps to 'Verb in the present participle form' because 'riding' as a gerund is fine but surrounding verbs need past tense. Suggestion: keep the gerund 'riding' but change accompanying verbs to past: 'liked' and 'gave'.

× Personally no because every many people use motorbike to go anywhere or care because I think by.

✓ Personally no, because many people use motorbikes to go everywhere or by car, I think.

The phrase 'every many people' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'many people' (incorrect use of quantifiers). Also 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' when referring to many people, and 'go anywhere' is better expressed as 'go everywhere'. The clause 'or care because I think by' appears to be garbled; likely intended 'or by car, I think.' Suggestion: use correct quantifiers ('many'), match noun plurality, and reorder the clause for clarity: 'many people use motorbikes to go everywhere or travel by car.'

× Personally no because every many people use motorbike to go anywhere or care because I think by.

✓ Personally no, because many people use motorbikes to go everywhere or travel by car, I think.

When referring to 'many people' the verb should be plural 'use', which the student had, but other issues include incorrect word order and word choice. The listed 'Third person singular issue' is noted here because if the subject had been singular the verb would need 'uses'; ensure subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: keep subject and verb agreement consistent and correct word order: 'many people use motorbikes to go everywhere or travel by car.'