Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief specific details. Use linking words to show sequence and avoid repetition (e.g., avoid repeating 'ride a bike'). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'learned to cycle' instead of repeating 'ride a bike'). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I learned to cycle when I was seven — my father taught me by running alongside me until I found my balance. After a few weeks of practice, I could ride confidently on quiet streets.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Give a clear reason and one specific example or comparison. Avoid sentence fragments and improve fluency by combining ideas into full sentences (topic sentence + supporting detail).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. For example, when I was in junior high and high school, more than half of the students cycled to school, so the streets around schools were often crowded with bicycles.

× At first I couldn't ride a bike very well, but my father taught me how to ride a bike and then finally I got to ride a bike.

✓ At first I couldn't ride a bike very well, but my father taught me how to ride, and finally I learned to ride a bike.

The original sentence is repetitive ('ride a bike' used three times) and has an awkward expression 'got to ride a bike.' Use consistent past-tense verbs and a natural collocation: 'learned to ride a bike.' Keep past tense because the context is about childhood.

× Yes, I do, because when I was a junior high school and a high school student.

✓ Yes, I do, because when I was a junior high and high school student, bikes were common.

The clause 'when I was a junior high school and a high school student' is ungrammatical; 'junior high school student' and 'high school student' are noun phrases and should be joined correctly. Also the sentence fragment lacks a main clause describing why bikes are popular. The corrected sentence combines the time phrase correctly and adds a main clause. Alternatively: 'when I was in junior high and high school' is also correct. Also ensure verb agreement and completeness of the sentence.

× More than half students had to use a bike to go to school and it was busy.

✓ More than half of students had to use a bike to go to school, and it was crowded.

'More than half students' is missing the preposition 'of' ('half of the students' or 'half of students'). Also 'busy' is not the right word to describe crowded conditions; 'crowded' fits better. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun phrase form by adding 'of'.