Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法と時制の使い方を修正し、短く明確なトピック文を作ってから必要なら補足を加えてください。現在形と過去形の混同（"don't have" と "was"）を避け、冠詞や複数形も正しく使うことが重要です。例えば、主文で過去の事実を述べ、その後で補足としていつ手に入れたかを示すと自然になります。具体的には「I didn’t have a bike as a child. I got one in high school.」のように、2文以内で完結に答える練習をしてください。また接続語はほとんど不要ですが、補足する場合は"however"や"later"などを使うと流れがよくなります。

Exemplo: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I bought one later when I was in high school, and I used it to cycle to school most days.

Sugestão: 答えはより論理的に展開し、具体的な理由と例を1〜2文で示してください。現状の文は文法エラー（"doesn't" は主語に合っていない）や不自然な語順があります。まず直接に意見を言い、次に理由を述べ、必要なら例を付ける構成にしてください。例："No, I don't think bikes are very popular. Many roads are unsafe and there are few bike lanes, so people prefer cars." のように、接続語（"because", "so"）を使って理由を明確に結びつけてください。

Exemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many roads are unsafe and there are few dedicated bike lanes, so most people prefer to drive.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but I have bike when I was high school student.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bike when I was a high school student.

You used present tense forms (don't have, have) while referring to past time (when I was a child; when I was a high school student). Use simple past for completed past events: 'didn't have' and 'had'. Also add the articles 'a' before 'child' (should be 'a child') and before 'high school student' ('a high school student'). Suggestions: practice choosing tense by identifying time expressions (e.g., 'when I was...') and use past tense; remember to include indefinite articles for singular countable nouns.

× Actually no. The reason why the bike is a dangerous vehicle so. Many people doesn't.

✓ Actually, no. The reason is that bikes are dangerous vehicles. Many people don't ride them.

There are multiple issues: 'The reason why the bike is a dangerous vehicle so' is ungrammatical—use 'The reason is that...' and match number: 'bikes are dangerous vehicles' (plural). 'Many people doesn't' is wrong because 'doesn't' is third person singular; with 'people' use 'don't'. Also 'doesn't' requires a verb: here 'ride' or 'use' should follow. Suggestions: use 'The reason is that...' to introduce explanations; ensure subject-verb agreement ('people don't'); include the main verb ('ride them').