Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammatical errors; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g. "handed down," "oversized," "control," "ride") and verb forms. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was an oversized bike handed down from my brothers, so at first I found it difficult to control. However, with practice I learned to ride it confidently and I often went cycling with them on weekends.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence and then give two specific supporting points using linking words. Fix the unclear final phrase and avoid hanging clauses. Use precise vocabulary like "commuting," "recreation," "more common among," and include brief examples or reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, teenagers often ride in groups for fun, while many adults use bicycles for commuting or weekend recreation, especially in cities with good bike lanes.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child and I often rode with my brothers.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I often rode with my brothers.

Missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'child'. Use 'a child' to indicate one child in the past. Suggestion: include the appropriate article with singular countable nouns (a/an/the) where required.

× It was actually handed down from them and was bit oversighted for me so I sometimes found it difficult to control and but then I learned how to write it.

✓ It was actually handed down from them and was a bit oversized for me, so I sometimes found it difficult to control, but then I learned how to ride it.

Multiple issues: 'bit' requires an article 'a' before it ('a bit'); 'oversighted' is incorrect — likely intended 'oversized'; 'write' is wrong verb — should be 'ride'; conjunctions and commas needed for clarity. Suggestions: use 'a bit' + adjective, choose correct adjective ('oversized'), and use the correct verb for riding a bike. Also separate clauses correctly with commas and remove redundant words ('and' before 'but').

× Yes, cycling is a very popular pastime in my country, especially among teenagers who often ride in groups.

✓ Yes, cycling is a very popular pastime in my country, especially among teenagers who often ride in groups.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. Keep present simple to describe general facts.

× Adults also cycle, sometimes for recreation or commuting, so they are less frequent than young people and.

✓ Adults also cycle, sometimes for recreation or commuting, but they do so less frequently than young people.

Problems: trailing 'and' makes sentence incomplete; 'less frequent' should be 'less frequently' (adverb) to modify the verb; 'do so' clarifies the activity. Suggestion: use an adverb to modify frequency and complete the sentence with a contrasting conjunction such as 'but'.