Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, in my child never have a bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 语法和表达需要改进。回答应该有一个明确的主题句并且用正确的时态和词序。可以简短补充原因或记忆以丰富内容,并使用连词使句子更连贯。例如说明为什么没有自行车或是否曾借过别人的。保持答案自然不冗长,最多5句。
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school. Occasionally I borrowed my neighbor’s bicycle to ride in the park. It was a nice treat when that happened.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答过于简短,需要扩展理由和具体例子。先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句说明原因并举例,使用连词保持逻辑性。可以谈论城市通勤、环保或休闲用途等。保持自然和简洁。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in big cities there are bike-sharing programs and dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling convenient and safe.
× No, in my child never have a bike.
✓ No, in my childhood I never had a bike.
句子结构和词形错误:原句用 in my child(错误名词)且时态用现在错误地搭配 never have。应使用名词 childhood 表示“童年”,并使用过去时 had 来与问题(过去时:Did you have...)保持一致。建议:把 in my child 改为 in my childhood,并把 have 改为过去式 had;同时加上主语 I,使句子完整。