Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Do you think bike are popular in your country?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未作任何回答。按评分规则,应直接给出主句并必要时补充细节。改进要点:1) 直接回答问题(肯定或否定)。2) 给出1–2个支持细节(例如年龄、谁送的、骑车的频率或记忆)。3) 使用连接词使句子连贯(例如:when, because, so)。请用不超过5句的自然表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red one my parents bought for my birthday. I rode it almost every day after school with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 你的回答仍然只是重复问题,未提供观点或支持细节。改进要点:1) 直接表达观点(肯定或否定)。2) 提供具体理由或例子(如通勤、休闲、城市政策、自行车道增多等)。3) 使用连接词连接观点与细节(例如:because, for example, however)。保持句子自然且不冗长。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have built more bike lanes and public bike-sharing programs, so cycling has become more convenient and widespread.
× Do you think bike are popular in your country?
✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
原句中名词“bike”与动词“are”不一致:使用了复数动词“are”,但名词用的是单数形式“bike”。正确做法是名词与动词在人称和数上保持一致。把“bike”改为复数“bikes”即可。建议:注意主语的单复数形式,动词也要相应变化;遇到主语为复数时用复数动词(are),主语为单数时用单数动词(is)。