Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan. So many people goes go to school or work by bike and there are many bikes in the station.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 質問をそのまま繰り返してしまっています。まずは直接的に答え(Yes/No)を述べ、その後に短い理由や具体例を付け加えてください。文法や語順にも注意し、自然な英語の語順で答えましょう。例えば過去の習慣を述べるときは“when I was a child”に続けて過去形で説明します。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it to my friend’s house every weekend. It helped me become more independent and active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 答えは明確ですが文法ミス('goes go'、動詞の一致)と語順の問題があります。まず簡潔なトピック文で答え、その後に具体的な理由や例を付けてください。接続語(for example, because)を使うと論理的につながります。また、語彙を少し広げて“commute”や“bike parking”など語を使うと自然です。
Exemplo: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular in Japan because many people commute short distances by bike. For example, students and office workers often ride to school or work, and you can see large areas of bike parking at train stations.
× Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan. So many people goes go to school or work by bike and there are many bikes in the station.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan. So many people go to school or work by bike and there are many bikes at the station.
The verb 'goes' is incorrect because the subject 'people' is plural and requires the base form 'go' (third person singular requires -s, but plural subjects do not). Also, the preposition 'in' before 'the station' is unnatural; use 'at the station' to indicate location where bikes are parked or present. Suggestion: use 'people go' for plural subjects and 'at the station' for location. Please note the corrected sentence maintains present tense to match the question about general popularity.