Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音や語彙の誤りを直し、文を論理的に整理することが必要です。まず冒頭で質問に簡潔に答え（肯定または否定）、次に短い理由や詳細を一つか二つ述べます。冗長な表現や意味の分かりにくい語（例："prayed a bullet"）は避け、正しい語（例："broke a bone"や"afraid of falling"）を使ってください。また文法を簡潔にし、5文以内に収めるようにしましょう。例：過去の状況→教師の助言→最終的な行動、の順で述べると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I was afraid of falling because I once almost broke my arm, and my teacher advised me not to ride it. As a result, I rarely rode the bike and didn't enjoy cycling much.

Sugestão: 意見を明確に述べ、理由を論理的に並べて具体例を加えることが必要です。まず短く結論を述べ（Yes/No）、次に2つの理由を挙げる際は接続詞（For example, Also, In addition）を使い流れを整えます。あいまいな言い回し（"it's gonna be"等）や繰り返しを避け、具体的な比較（電車の料金や通勤事情）を入れてください。語彙はシンプルで正確な単語（environmentally friendly, affordable, crowded trains）を使い、全体を4文以内に収めましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are environmentally friendly and inexpensive compared with trains. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes because trains can be crowded and costly. Therefore cycling is a practical choice for daily travel.

× I had a bike when I was a child, but I prayed a bullet when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I broke a pedal when I was a child.

The student used the incorrect verb 'prayed' which does not fit the intended meaning. The context suggests a past action that damaged the bike; 'broke a pedal' (or 'broke a wheel') is an appropriate past tense phrase. Use a correct past-tense regular/irregular verb to describe completed actions in the past. Suggestion: choose a verb that matches the intended meaning (e.g., 'broke', 'damaged').

× So my teacher told me you should not ride on a bike because you will be injured.

✓ My teacher told me I should not ride a bike because I might be injured.

The original mixes reported speech with a direct future 'you will be injured' which is awkward in reported speech. When reporting advice given in the past, use a reporting verb plus the modal 'should' and a modal like 'might' to express possibility. Also change 'ride on a bike' to 'ride a bike' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'I should not ride a bike' and 'might' for possible outcomes.

× So I didn't.

✓ So I didn't ride it.

The original sentence 'So I didn't.' is grammatically acceptable but incomplete; adding the verb 'ride' and object 'it' clarifies the action referred to and matches the past context. Suggestion: include the omitted verb to avoid ambiguity in short answers.

× I didn't like the bike but I had a bike.

✓ I didn't like the bike even though I had one.

The sentence is understandable but awkwardly repeated. Use 'even though' for contrast and replace the repeated noun with a pronoun or 'one' for natural phrasing. Tense remains past. Suggestion: use pronouns to avoid repetition and connect clauses clearly.

× I think so because umm, riding on the bike is so friendly for the environment and also it's not in it's not expensive.

✓ I think so because riding a bike is environmentally friendly and it's not expensive.

Problems: 'riding on the bike' is unnatural; use 'riding a bike' or 'cycling'. 'Friendly for the environment' should be 'environmentally friendly'. The phrase 'it's not in it's not expensive' repeats and contains 'in' incorrectly. Suggestion: simplify to 'riding a bike is environmentally friendly and not expensive.'

× So and also in Japan, right, right on the train is so expensive and it gonna be.

✓ Also, in Japan, trains are very expensive, and so it can be.

This sentence has multiple issues: unclear phrase 'right on the train', missing verb form 'is' for 'gonna be', and informal 'gonna'. Use 'trains are very expensive' and 'so it can be' or 'so that can be the case' for clarity. Suggestion: use complete verbs and avoid colloquial contractions like 'gonna' in formal responses. Reduce filler words like 'right' and 'so and also'.