Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngữ pháp chính xác và không lặp từ. Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra, sửa lỗi chủ-động từ (they were, not they was), và tránh lặp 'health' hai lần. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi bạn muốn xe, lý do sợ rủi ro) và dùng từ nối khi cần để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried that I might fall and get seriously injured, so they never bought one for me. I wanted a bike when I was about eight, but they preferred me to play safer sports like swimming.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời nên tự tin hơn và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh các tiếng lấp (uh, like). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng linking words (for example, however) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (tỷ lệ, lý do: khoảng cách, cơ sở hạ tầng, khí hậu). Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

Exemplo: From my perspective, bicycles are not very popular in my city. Most people prefer to drive or use buses because distances are long and the cycling infrastructure is poor. For example, there are few bike lanes and traffic is heavy, which makes cycling unsafe for daily commuting.

× Well, actually in my childhood, my parents tend to buy me one, but they remember that they are anxious.

✓ Well, actually in my childhood, my parents tended to buy me one, but they remembered that they were anxious.

The speaker describes past events, so present tense 'tend' and 'are' are incorrect. Use past tense 'tended' and 'were' for consistency. Suggestion: use past simple for actions and states in the past (e.g., 'my parents tended to buy me one' and 'they were anxious').

× They was anxious about my health and my physical health so that they didn't.

✓ They were anxious about my health, so they didn't buy one.

'Was' is singular past; with plural subject 'they' use 'were'. Also the clause 'so that they didn't' is incomplete; specify the action (buy one). Suggestion: use 'they were' for plural past and complete the meaning ('so they didn't buy one').

× Not at all from my perspective.

✓ Not at all, from my perspective.

This is punctuation rather than grammar, but the fragment is acceptable as a short response. Adding a comma improves clarity. Ensure complete sentences in formal speech: 'Not at all from my perspective' is fine conversationally; keep consistent tense in surrounding sentences.

× In my whole city, uh, like many residents tend to uh, drive to work or like take buses or ride.

✓ In my city, many residents tend to drive to work, take buses, or ride bikes.

Redundant fillers ('uh', 'like') should be removed for clarity. 'In my whole city' is awkward; use 'In my city'. Parallel structure requires all verbs in same base form after 'tend to' (drive, take, ride). Specify object for 'ride' (ride bikes). Suggestion: maintain parallel verb forms and include the object when necessary.

× So uh, and bikes are so uncommon.

✓ So bikes are quite uncommon.

Minor style issue: 'so uncommon' is colloquial; 'quite uncommon' is more natural. Remove filler words ('uh', 'and') that don't add meaning. Ensure noun 'bikes' plural matches verb 'are' (which is correct). Suggestion: eliminate disfluencies and choose natural adverb ('quite').