Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce filler words and correct grammar (tense/subject-verb agreement). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle from the age of five. My mother bought it so I could ride to school and visit my friends easily, which saved time and gave me independence. Also, I loved its bright red color because it made the bike easy to spot in the yard.

Sugestão: Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., 'translation') and combine fragments into coherent sentences using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example'). Provide a specific reason or example to support your opinion. Watch article and verb usage.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and office workers often cycle to work to avoid traffic and cut transport costs, and cycling is also seen as healthier and more environmentally friendly.

× My mother bought it for me so I can easily roll it to school and to play with my friends, umm, whenever I want.

✓ My mother bought it for me so I could easily ride it to school and play with my friends whenever I wanted.

The sentence is about a past situation (when the speaker was five), so the verbs should be in past tense or past modal form. 'can' and 'want' are present-tense and inconsistent with 'bought'. Also 'roll it to school' is unnatural; 'ride it' is the correct collocation for a bike. Suggest using 'could' and 'wanted' to match the past context and remove redundant 'to' before 'play'. Suggestion: Use past modal 'could' for ability in the past and simple past 'wanted' for repeated past desire.

× I really like my bike because it's helps me, uh, so much and I love the color of it.

✓ I really liked my bike because it helped me so much, and I loved its color.

The speaker is recounting a past experience, so verbs and pronouns should be past tense. 'it's helps' is ungrammatical: 'it helps' or 'it helped'; here 'helped' is correct. Also 'the color of it' is wordy; use the possessive pronoun 'its'. To maintain consistent past narration, change 'like'/'love' to 'liked'/'loved'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use 'its' for possession.

× Oh yeah, it's really popular in my country.

✓ Oh yeah, they're really popular in my country.

The question asks whether 'bikes' are popular; the subject is plural. 'It's' refers to singular and is incorrect here. Use the plural pronoun 'they're' to match 'bikes'. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match the number of the noun they refer to.

× People often use it as a, umm, translation. In daily life.

✓ People often use them for daily transport.

'Use it as a translation' is incorrect and unclear. Likely the intended meaning is 'transport'. Also 'In daily life.' is a sentence fragment. Combine ideas into one complete sentence and use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'bikes'. Suggestion: Replace unclear word 'translation' with 'transport' and avoid sentence fragments by combining related phrases.

× They prefer use a bike than motorbike because it's really safe and, umm, good for the environment.

✓ They prefer to use a bike rather than a motorbike because it's really safe and good for the environment.

Two issues: verb pattern and comparison. 'Prefer' is followed by 'to' plus infinitive ('prefer to use') or 'prefer X to Y'. Also 'than' is used with comparatives, while 'rather than' suits preference. 'Motorbike' should have article 'a' before it for clarity. 'It's' is acceptable referring to 'a bike' (singular generalization), but could also be 'they are' if referring to bikes in general. Suggestion: Use correct verb pattern ('prefer to use') or structure 'prefer a bike to a motorbike'; use 'rather than' when contrasting actions.