Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g. "I didn't have a bike" / "a bike"), avoid repetition, and limit answer to about 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I didn't have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed one from my cousins. Therefore I learned to ride by practicing with them in our neighborhood, and after a few tries I could cycle confidently.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use correct tense and avoid filler repetition. Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "for example") to improve coherence and stay within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to local markets or schools, which helps them avoid traffic and save money.

× Honestly, I don't have a bike during my childhood but then I do borrow bike from my cousins.

✓ Honestly, I didn't have a bike during my childhood, but I did borrow a bike from my cousins.

The sentence describes past situations, so present tense 'don't have' and 'do borrow' are incorrect. Use past simple 'didn't have' and 'did borrow'. Also include the article 'a' before 'bike'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events and include appropriate articles.'

× So I was able to train to do biking and there was one time where I don't really know how to do bike but then I was actually gone.

✓ So I was able to train to ride a bike, and there was one time when I didn't really know how to ride, but then I actually managed to learn.

Mixed tenses occur: 'was able to' is past but 'don't really know' is present; change to past 'didn't really know'. 'Train to do biking' is awkward — use 'train to ride a bike' or 'learn to ride a bike'. 'There was one time where' better as 'there was one time when'. 'I was actually gone' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'I actually managed to learn' to convey successful outcome.'

× During my childhood, yes, it is popular in our country, especially when you go to places near you and you avoid walking.

✓ During my childhood, yes, they were popular in our country, especially for short trips when people wanted to avoid walking.

The sentence refers to past period 'During my childhood' so use past tense 'were' not present 'is/it is'. Also 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they' and plural verb. 'When you go to places near you and you avoid walking' is generic; better: 'for short trips when people wanted to avoid walking.' Maintain past tense and match plurals.'

× So you, you, you have to ride a bike.

✓ So you had to ride a bike.

Repetition 'you, you, you' is unnecessary. Context refers to past habits, so use past tense 'had to'. Also avoid repetitive pronoun use; keep a single 'you' or use 'people had to' if speaking generally.'