Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Shorten and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (e.g., “uh”) and check grammar (tense consistency and sentence boundaries). Aim for more varied vocabulary (e.g., gifted, commute, explore).

Exemplo: Yes — I had a bike as a child. My father gave it to me when I was nine, and I used it every day to commute to school and to visit nearby shops. I also rode it to meet friends at the park, so cycling was an important part of my routine.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and support your opinion with one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words (because, moreover, for example) and prefer more natural phrasing (e.g., “more convenient,” “affordable,” “widely available”). Avoid repetitive sentence starters like “And.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and more convenient than cars for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to shop locally, and bikes are easy to buy and maintain, especially in crowded cities.

× It was gifted to me by my father when I was nine years old and I love to cycle When, uh, I was going to school and when I wanted to visit some new nearby shops and whenever I want to hang out with my friends, I used to cycle a lot.

✓ It was gifted to me by my father when I was nine years old and I loved to cycle. When I was going to school, when I wanted to visit some nearby shops, and whenever I wanted to hang out with my friends, I used to cycle a lot.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses ('I was', 'I love', 'whenever I want') even though the context describes past habitual actions. Use past tense consistently ('loved', 'wanted') to match the time frame. Also add punctuation to separate clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country. It is an easier mode of travel rather than cars, and it is cheaper.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country. They are an easier mode of travel than cars, and they are cheaper.

The original uses singular 'It' to refer to plural 'bikes'. This is a pronoun agreement issue but falls under present tense/context: use plural pronoun 'they' and replace 'rather than' with 'than' which is the correct comparative connector here. Keep present tense verbs ('are', 'are').

× And it is pretty much easier to access and to buy as well.

✓ And they are much easier to access and to buy as well.

Use plural 'they' for 'bikes' and 'much easier' is the correct adverbial modifier; 'pretty much easier' is informal and awkward. 'To access' is acceptable but ensure plural agreement. Also keep parallel infinitive structure 'to access and to buy'.

× And it is the most common form of transport in my country.

✓ And they are the most common form of transport in my country.

Using singular 'it' to refer to plural 'bikes' is incorrect. Replace with plural 'they' and keep present tense 'are' because this describes a general present fact.