Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, use correct grammar, avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., “a very awesome” → “an awesome” and “didn't really have” not “had”). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I always wanted one because it would have been fun to ride to my neighbors' houses and play with other children. I imagined that cycling would also give me more freedom to explore the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use linking words to structure reasons, and be specific. Avoid hedging phrases like “I think so” at the end. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “good exercise” instead of “good activity,” and “improves circulation” rather than “helps with the blood flow and the heart”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Bikes are becoming more popular in my country, though they are not as common as cars. This rise is partly due to health and environmental awareness, since cycling is good exercise and improves circulation. Also, more cities are building bike lanes, which encourages people to ride.

× So yeah, I didn't really had one, but I wish I.

✓ So yeah, I didn't really have one, but I wish I had one.

The auxiliary 'did' requires the base form of the main verb, so 'didn't have' is correct, not 'didn't had'. Also the clause 'but I wish I' is incomplete; add 'had one' to express a counterfactual wish about the past.

× it would be an very awesome experience to have a bike

✓ it would be a very awesome experience to have a bike

Use 'a' before words that begin with a consonant sound. 'Very' begins with a consonant sound 'v', so the correct article is 'a', not 'an'.

× and uh, uh, communicating with the neighbors to go out and have fun with the other kids

✓ and, uh, communicating with the neighbors, going out and having fun with the other kids

The original phrase mixes verb forms and lacks parallel structure. Use parallel gerunds ('communicating', 'going', 'having') or rephrase as 'to communicate... to go out and have fun' to maintain grammatical consistency.

× Well, not really, but I quite see a few people riding bikes these days.

✓ Well, not really, but I do quite often see a few people riding bikes these days.

The adverb 'quite' is misplaced. Use 'quite often' to modify 'see', and include the auxiliary 'do' for emphasis in present simple: 'I do quite often see' or more naturally 'I quite often see'.

× Maybe it's because a trend or maybe it's a really good activity to do because it helps with the body and the blood flow and the heart.

✓ Maybe it's because of a trend, or maybe it's because it's a really good activity that helps the body, blood circulation, and the heart.

Use the preposition 'because of' with 'a trend' (not 'because a trend'). Also make the sentence parallel and clearer by specifying 'helps the body, blood circulation, and the heart' and adding 'because it's' to parallel the two reasons.