Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details with correct tense and linking words. Avoid redundancy and long tangled phrases. For example, correct tense use (“I didn’t have”), remove extra words (“when during”), and add a brief reason or memory with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I always wanted one because I thought it would let me travel to school independently. As a result, I often borrowed my friend’s bike on weekends.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then support it with specific reasons and clear linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., “where I was born and raised”), remove redundant phrases, and use precise vocabulary (“commonly used,” “time-saving,” “for commuting”). Limit to two or three short sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in Shanghai where I was born and raised. They are useful and convenient for short trips and commuting, and they save time in heavy traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when during my childhood I always expecting to have my own transportation tool so I can go to school by bike myself.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike during my childhood. I always expected to have my own means of transportation so I could ride a bike to school by myself.

This sentence contains multiple issues: incorrect tense forms and sentence structure. 'When during my childhood' is redundant; use 'during my childhood' or 'when I was a child' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 6 and 26). 'I always expecting' uses the present participle incorrectly; the past simple 'I always expected' matches the past context (Problem Type IDs 8 and 5). 'So I can go to school' should be 'so I could ride a bike to school' to maintain past tense consistency and use a more natural verb and object (Problem Type IDs 7 and 26). Suggestions: split into two sentences for clarity, use past simple for past habits, replace 'transportation tool' with 'means of transportation' or simply 'a bike', and use 'ride a bike to school' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I do think that bikes are really popular in China, especially Shanghai which where the place that I born and raised in here since it is useful and convenient and it worked as a time saver for people to go to their work.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China, especially in Shanghai, which is the place where I was born and raised, since they are useful and convenient and save people time when they go to work.

This sentence has several errors: redundant 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present simple (Problem Type ID 6), misuse of 'which where the place that I born and raised in here' involves incorrect relative clause, word order, and missing auxiliary/tense (Problem Type IDs 26, 12, 9). 'I born and raised' needs passive/auxiliary 'was born and raised' (Problem Type ID 9). 'Since it is useful' should agree in number with 'bikes' and remain in present tense: 'they are useful' (Problem Type IDs 1 and 6). 'It worked as a time saver' mixes past tense and singular pronoun; use 'save people time' or 'they save people time' (Problem Type IDs 7 and 1). Suggestions: remove redundant words, use 'in Shanghai', use 'which is the place where I was born and raised' or 'where I was born and raised', ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent present tense for general facts.