Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and verb tense consistency, reduce redundancy, and organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use past tense for childhood, connect ideas with a linking word, and avoid extraneous fillers. For example, say you did not have a bike, give a reason and a brief supporting detail.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I preferred playing with dolls and Lego. For that reason, I wasn’t interested in learning to ride, and I was too afraid to try sitting on a bicycle.

Sugestão: Make sentences natural and concise, use correct word forms (e.g., 'people' not 'peoples'), and add specific examples or reasons linked with connectors. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and wordy phrases such as 'too much popular'. Structure: direct answer, reason, and a brief example or comparison.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many young people and older adults use them for daily travel because they are cheap and convenient; for example, students often cycle to school and shopkeepers use bicycles to deliver goods.

× When I am a child, I have no bike because I love to play with the dolls and. Legos and I didn't like bikes because I am really afraid of sitting on the bikes.

✓ When I was a child, I had no bike because I loved to play with dolls and Legos, and I didn't like bikes because I was really afraid of sitting on them.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. Use past tense to describe childhood (was, had, loved, was). Remove the article before plural 'dolls' and use 'Legos' without a period. Replace 'on the bikes' with the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition and ensure correct pronoun reference. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent when narrating past events and use appropriate pronouns for plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In this contemporary era, bike is a crucial need for youngsters as well as older peoples.

✓ In this contemporary era, bikes are a crucial necessity for youngsters as well as older people.

'Bike' should be plural ('bikes') when referring generally; this is both a pluralization and article/number issue. Use 'are' to match the plural subject. 'Crucial need' is awkward; 'crucial necessity' or 'essential' is better. 'Peoples' is incorrect when referring to older individuals — use 'older people'. Suggestion: match number between subject and verb and use correct plural nouns and collocations. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Uh, yes of course. In my country bikes are too much popular as uh, the youngsters use on daily basis, uh, to buy things from.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country bikes are very popular because youngsters use them on a daily basis to buy things.

Replace informal 'too much popular' with 'very popular' and ensure proper adverb placement. 'Use on daily basis' needs the article 'a' and the object 'them' to refer to bikes. Remove the preposition 'from' at the end which is unnecessary. Maintain present simple for general statements. Suggestion: use 'very popular', include 'a' in 'on a daily basis', and use appropriate pronouns and sentence structure for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× the youngsters use on daily basis, uh, to buy things from.

✓ the youngsters use them on a daily basis to buy things.

The original fragment omits the object pronoun 'them' referring to bikes and incorrectly ends with the preposition 'from'. Add 'them' and remove 'from' for grammatical completeness. Suggestion: ensure objects referenced by verbs are present and avoid dangling prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:11