Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hạn chế câu dài rối, thêm câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng động từ và cấu trúc đúng, và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi, cảm xúc, kỷ niệm). Sửa các lỗi như 'to let me try go to' thành 'so I could ride to'. Ngoài ra giữ tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a new bicycle when I was eight so I could ride to school. I remember feeling very proud and excited because it was my first proper bike, and I used to practice every afternoon with my friends.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng thiếu mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng liên từ phù hợp để mở rộng (e.g. 'because', 'however'), sửa lỗi như 'agriculture cultures' → 'agricultural countries/culture' và 'it is get more or less than before' → 'their use has decreased/increased in recent years' kèm lý do (ví dụ: phát triển kinh tế, sự xuất hiện của xe máy). Thêm ví dụ hoặc xu hướng cụ thể để tăng điểm nội dung.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are still common, especially in rural areas where agriculture is widespread because many people find them cheap and practical for short trips. However, their use has declined in cities recently as more people buy motorbikes and cars for convenience.

× When I was a child, my mother gave me a new bicycle to let me try go to school and entertain.

✓ When I was a child, my mother gave me a new bicycle so I could try going to school and have fun.

The phrase 'try go' is incorrect because after verbs like 'try' we use the gerund (verb + -ing) or the infinitive depending on meaning. Here 'try going to school' indicates attempting the action. Also 'to let me' is awkward; 'so I could' fits intention. 'Entertain' is a verb that needs an object; 'have fun' correctly expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'try going' and 'have fun' for natural English.

× Yes, I think because our country is one of the most agriculture cultures in the world so we usually use bikes to travel instead of cars and motorbikes.

✓ Yes, I think so because our country is one of the most agricultural cultures in the world, so we usually use bikes to travel instead of cars and motorbikes.

The word 'agriculture' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'agricultural'. Also add 'so' after 'I think' for cohesion. Insert a comma before 'so' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: use the adjective form 'agricultural' and include linking words and punctuation for clarity.

× However it is get more or less than before.

✓ However, it is more or less the same as before.

The structure 'is get' is incorrect; you do not combine 'be' with 'get' in this way. To express comparison with previous time use 'is... the same as' or 'has gotten' plus adjective. 'More or less' should modify 'the same'. Suggestion: use 'it is more or less the same as before' or 'it has become more or less the same as before' depending on nuance.