Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct tense and clearer vocabulary, and keep within 1–4 sentences. Start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct grammar (past tense) and simpler phrases will improve clarity.

Exemplo: Not really. I didn’t own a bike as a child, but I often borrowed friends’ bikes and rode them with friends around the waterfront. We usually met after school and spent an hour cycling together, which was fun and relaxed.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use correct grammar and precise vocabulary (e.g. lanes, bike lanes, many people). Provide one or two specific reasons with a linking word like because or so. Avoid informal contractions and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few dedicated bike lanes and cycling can feel unsafe. As a result, most people commute by public transport or car, especially for longer distances.

× Not really, I often just go to chatting and we ran the bike and just ride the bike around the waterfront instead of having a bike myself.

✓ Not really, I often just go chatting and we ran the bike and just rode the bike around the waterfront instead of having a bike myself.

The phrase 'go to chatting' is incorrect; after 'go' when meaning 'engage in an activity' use the -ing form without 'to' (go chatting). Also 'ran the bike' mixes past tense 'ran' with 'ride'; for consistent past-time reference use 'rode the bike'. Ensure verb forms match the intended time frame and the verb patterns: 'go' + gerund and past simple 'rode'.

× Not really, I often just go to chatting and we ran the bike and just ride the bike around the waterfront instead of having a bike myself.

✓ Not really, I often just go chatting and we ran the bike and just rode the bike around the waterfront instead of having a bike myself.

This sentence contains inconsistent tense forms. 'We ran the bike' uses the past tense of 'run', which is not the correct verb for riding a bicycle; use 'rode' (past of 'ride'). Also 'ride the bike' should be 'rode the bike' to match past reference. Keep past actions in past simple for consistency.

× I don't think so 'cause there aren't too much row for bikes in my country.

✓ I don't think so 'cause there aren't too many rows for bikes in my country.

'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'rows' is countable, so use 'too many'. Also 'row for bikes' is odd; 'row' likely intended as 'rows' meaning 'lanes' or 'spaces'; ensure plural form when referring to countable items.

× Mostly people go to work or commute by public transport or driving.

✓ Mostly people go to work or commute by public transport or by driving.

When listing modes of travel, use parallel prepositions: 'commute by public transport or by driving' or better 'commute by public transport or drive.' The original mixes 'commute by' with 'driving' without a preposition, causing parallelism and preposition errors.

× I don't think so 'cause there aren't too much row for bikes in my country.

✓ I don't think so 'cause there aren't too many rows for bikes in my country.

The verb 'aren't' agrees with plural noun 'rows', which is correct, but the original noun phrase used 'row' (singular) after 'aren't', causing subject-verb/noun agreement mismatch. Use plural 'rows' to match 'aren't' and the intended meaning.