Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "No, I didn't have a bike.") then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers ("umm") and tense errors. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, mention how often you borrowed friends' bikes and a brief reason (safety, cost, or preference).

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I often borrowed my friends' bikes at weekends because my family lived in a small flat and we couldn't store one. As a result, I still learned to ride and enjoyed cycling occasionally.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with organized, specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and correct grammar. Remove repetitions and hesitations. Explain one or two concrete reasons why bikes are popular (short distances, low traffic, cheap transport) and conclude briefly. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people live close to shops and schools, so short trips are easy by bicycle. Moreover, cycling is affordable and convenient where traffic is calm, so many residents prefer bikes for daily errands.

× No, I don't have had a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The student is talking about the past (childhood), so the past simple tense is required. 'Don't have had' incorrectly mixes present simple negative with the past participle. Use 'didn't have' for negative past statements. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have' for past negatives.

× When I was childhood I used to, umm, play the bike of my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I used to ride my friends' bikes.

'When I was childhood' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'when I was a child.' 'Play the bike of my friends' wrongly uses 'play' and awkward possessive phrasing. 'Ride' is the correct verb for bicycles, and possessive plural 'friends' with apostrophe is needed. Also comma placement: put a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child, I used to ride my friends' bikes.'

× Uh, yes, the bikes are popular in my country because, uh, the houses of my neighborhood neighborhood and our is uh, in a short distance so we can roaming around and there is no peak like Rd. over there.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because the houses in my neighborhood are close together, so we can ride around, and there are no big hills like on that road.

Multiple problems: unnecessary definite article 'the bikes' — use 'bikes' generally (article error/usage). 'The houses of my neighborhood' should be 'the houses in my neighborhood' (preposition error). 'and our is uh, in a short distance' mixes pronouns and verb forms; correct is 'are close together' (subject-verb agreement and adjective use). 'we can roaming' uses incorrect verb form after modal; should be 'we can ride/roam' (verb + -ing issue). 'there is no peak like Rd. over there' is unclear; 'no big hills like on that road' is clearer (noun choice and preposition). Suggestion: simplify and use correct prepositions and verb forms: 'the houses in my neighborhood are close together, so we can ride around, and there are no big hills like on that road.'

× So that the there is a dangerous thing will happen.

✓ So there is less chance of something dangerous happening.

This sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary filler words ('the there is a dangerous thing will happen'). Use a clear structure: 'there is less chance of something dangerous happening' or 'so it's less likely that something dangerous will happen.' Also use 'happening' as the gerund after 'of' or use 'will happen' with 'it's less likely that'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'so there is less chance of something dangerous happening.'

× Yeah, I think that's why.

✓ Yes, I think that's why.

'Yeah' is informal but not ungrammatical; change to 'Yes' for a more appropriate test register. No tense error here, but adjust word choice for formality. Suggestion: use 'Yes' in formal speaking tests.