Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix tense consistency and eliminate repetition. Aim for 2–4 well-formed sentences, use past tense for childhood events, and mention a clear detail (where, who, what you did).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it on weekends to the park with my family and my brother, and we would race each other on the bike paths. Those outings were one of my favorite parts of the weekend.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence then add a specific example and a reason using linking words. Avoid filler words and repeat vocabulary. Use precise phrasing (e.g., "bike lanes" or "cycling paths") and explain why they make cycling popular.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe bicycles are popular in my country. For example, in my city Rosario there are dedicated bike lanes and cycling streets, so many people commute by bike, especially students and office workers.

× Yes I used to have a bike I use that at on the weekends usually.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike. I used it on the weekends, usually.

The sentence mixes past habit ('used to have') with present tense 'use' and contains an extra preposition 'at'. The context asks about childhood, so actions should be in the past. Change 'I use' to 'I used' to match past tense and remove the incorrect 'at'. Also add punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense when describing past habits: 'I used to have... I used it...'.

× I went to the park with my family and and I have a brother and they had their a their his bike too so it was awesome weekends.

✓ I went to the park with my family. I have a brother, and he had his bike too, so the weekends were awesome.

This sentence has multiple issues: repetition ('and and'), mixed tenses ('went' past and 'have' present), incorrect pronoun agreement ('they' for brother), extra articles ('their a their his'), and pluralization of 'weekends' without a determiner. To describe past events, keep past tense ('he had') and adjust pronouns to match singular 'brother'. Use 'the weekends were awesome' to refer to those recurring weekends. Break into shorter sentences for clarity. Suggestion: Use consistent tense and correct pronouns: 'I went... I have a brother, and he had his bike too, so the weekends were awesome.'

× For example, I live in Rosario and there you have a cycling cycle streets.

✓ For example, I live in Rosario, and there are cycling streets.

The phrase 'there you have' is informal and awkward here; 'there are' (there be issue) is more natural. 'Cycling cycle streets' repeats the idea; use 'cycling streets' or 'bike lanes'. Also the original used present correctly, but wording needed correction. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for existence and avoid repeating synonyms: 'there are cycling streets' or 'there are bike lanes.'