Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify vocabulary and correct mistakes; give a concise topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Avoid confusion between 'bike' and 'bag' and correct verbs (ride, rode). Be specific about memories (where you rode, who with, feelings).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it every day around my neighborhood with my friends. It was bright red, and I loved how fast it could go, so I remember it very clearly.

Sugestão: Make your opinion clear and support it with specific reasons and coherent linking words. Use correct terms (rural areas, bike lanes) and explain consequences (safety, infrastructure). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid fragmented phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, cycling is quite popular in parts of my country, especially in rural areas where roads are quieter. However, in big cities like the capital of Malaysia there are few bike lanes, so fewer people cycle there. As a result, cycling is less common in urban areas because of safety concerns and heavy traffic.

× Yes, I had a bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student answered the question about a bike but wrote 'bag', which is a wrong noun choice (lexical error). This is not a grammar rule from the provided list, but it is an incorrect referent and causes misunderstanding. Replace 'bag' with 'bike' to match the examiner's question and context.

× When I was seven years old, my parents bought me a bag.

✓ When I was seven years old, my parents bought me a bike.

The verb 'bought' is correctly in the past tense to match 'When I was seven', but the noun 'bag' is inconsistent with earlier/below mentions of a bike. Change 'bag' to 'bike' to maintain consistent meaning.

× I wrote it every day around my neighborhood.

✓ I rode it every day around my neighborhood.

The verb 'wrote' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb for using a bike is 'ride'. To describe repeated past action, use the past tense 'rode'. This fixes both vocabulary and verb form.

× It's a red bag.

✓ It was a red bike.

Maintain past tense consistency because the student is describing a childhood bike. Use 'was' not 'is', and replace 'bag' with 'bike' to match context.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The original 'it's' (it is) is vague and uses a singular pronoun for a plural subject. The question asks about 'bikes' in general, so use the plural subject 'bikes are' with present simple to state a general fact.

× In my country there are a lot of back lands, but I know some place such like the capital of Malaysia, there are few bike lanes.

✓ In my country there are a lot of backlands, but I know some places, such as the capital, Kuala Lumpur, where there are few bike lanes.

Multiple issues: 'back lands' should be 'backlands' or 'rural areas' (word choice/compound noun), 'some place such like' is ungrammatical; use 'some places, such as' or 'for example'. Also need a relative clause 'where there are few bike lanes' to connect location and the fact. This correction preserves meaning and fixes preposition/structure errors.

× That makes cycling less.

✓ That makes cycling less common.

'Makes cycling less' is incomplete; 'less' requires a comparative complement. Use 'less common' to indicate reduced frequency or popularity.

× More safety, less safety.

✓ There is less safety for cyclists in those places.

The fragment 'More safety, less safety' is unclear and ungrammatical. To express the intended contrast, use a full sentence such as 'There is less safety for cyclists in those places.' This clarifies the meaning and uses correct adjective/noun forms.