Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak clearly with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 concise supporting details. Use simple correct grammar and logical word order. For example, say you had a bike, who gave it, and one memory about it. Avoid repetition and unclear words.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike as a birthday present when I was seven, and I remember riding it every afternoon in the park near our house. It felt exciting to learn to balance on two wheels, and I quickly became more confident riding on the road.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear opinion and then support it with 2–3 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, therefore, for example). Use correct collocations (e.g., "pay attention to health", "ride bikes", "travel by bike"). Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular. Firstly, many people pay more attention to health, so they choose to ride bikes for regular exercise. Secondly, cities are improving cycle lanes, which makes cycling safer. For example, families often ride bikes on weekends to enjoy fresh air and save money on transport.

× Definitely like one eye or a child would I hired by that is that was my parents send for me as a Mustang as a birthday birthday gift.

✓ Definitely, I had one when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday gift; it was a Mustang bike.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: words are out of order and extra fragments make it unintelligible. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). To correct it, reorganize into clear clauses with subject-verb-object order: 'I had one' (subject + past tense verb) and 'My parents bought it for me' (subject + past tense verb + object). Remove duplicated words ('birthday birthday') and unclear phrases ('like one eye or a child would I hired by that is') and replace with simple, correct expressions. Suggestion: keep sentences short and follow standard English word order (Subject + Verb + Object).

× Well, of course with the development of helps more and more people pay more attention to health.

✓ Well, of course, with development, more and more people are paying attention to their health.

The original uses incorrect structure 'with the development of helps' which is grammatically incorrect and mixes noun phrases. This matches 'Present tense issue' (ID 6) because the action 'pay attention' should be in present progressive to show an ongoing trend. Correction: use 'with development' or 'with the development of society' and the present continuous 'are paying attention' to indicate an ongoing change. Also add a possessive pronoun 'their' before 'health'.

× So as in prepare to go out to travel or to go to somewhere they tend to train bikes.

✓ So when preparing to go out to travel or to go somewhere, they tend to ride bikes.

The original has incorrect verb forms and word choice: 'in prepare' is wrong and 'train bikes' is incorrect verb usage. This matches 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8) because the gerund/participial phrase should be 'preparing' after 'when'. Also the correct verb for using a bicycle is 'ride', not 'train'. The corrected sentence uses 'preparing' and simplifies 'to go to somewhere' to 'to go somewhere'. Suggestion: use 'when' + verb-ing for background actions, and use correct collocations such as 'ride a bike'.