Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, avoid informal fillers and slang, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Replace fillers (umm, like) and slang (suck at) with natural alternatives. Maintain sentence count under five and use a linking word to connect past difficulty with present ability.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first it had training wheels because I had trouble keeping my balance, but after practice I learned to ride confidently.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct opinion sentence, avoid trailing off, and give one or two specific supporting reasons or a brief comparison using linking words. Use precise vocabulary (designated bike lanes, public transport) and finish your thought fully.

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in Tunisia because there are few designated bike lanes and cycling infrastructure. In contrast, cities like Amsterdam have extensive bike routes, which makes cycling a safe and convenient option.

× But now I can like really cycle pretty well.

✓ But now I can really cycle pretty well.

The filler word 'like' is informal and unnecessary; grammatically it is not a verb+ -ing error but its removal improves formality and clarity. Suggest removing 'like' when aiming for correct, formal spoken English.

× I actually had four wheels because I used to suck at riding bikes, umm, couldn't maintain balance.

✓ I actually had training wheels because I used to be bad at riding bikes and couldn't maintain my balance.

'Had four wheels' is informal and unclear; 'training wheels' is the correct term. 'Suck at' is informal and nonstandard for formal correction; use 'be bad at'. The clause 'umm, couldn't maintain balance' lacks an explicit subject; add 'I' and possessive 'my' for clarity. Combine with 'and' to connect causes.

× I wouldn't say that Tunisia is really popular for cycling because we don't have lanes designated for bikes, so people tend to just walk or take public transportation.

✓ I wouldn't say that cycling is very popular in Tunisia because we don't have lanes designated for bikes, so people tend to walk or take public transportation.

Prefer 'popular in [country]' or 'cycling is popular in [country]'; the original 'Tunisia is really popular for cycling' is awkward. Also 'tend to just walk' is colloquial; place adverb appropriately: 'tend to walk'. Reordering improves clarity and natural English.

× Unlike cities like Amsterdam or Moscow, they really have special routes for bikes, so people tend to.

✓ Unlike cities such as Amsterdam or Moscow, which have special bike routes, people there use them a lot.

The original sentence misuses 'unlike' with a pronoun 'they' and ends abruptly with 'so people tend to.' This is a sentence structure problem: unclear subject and incomplete clause. Rephrase to introduce the cities and complete the comparison, and avoid dangling 'tend to' by specifying the action ('use them a lot').