Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer in past tense and add one or two brief supporting details. Use a topic sentence that answers the question, then a short supporting detail (where/why/how often). Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence using correct grammar, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid vague phrases and awkward collocations; use concrete examples and limit to two or three short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people use bikes to commute short distances in cities, and there are also bicycle lanes in several urban areas that encourage cycling.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response should also be in the past tense. Use 'did' (past) rather than 'do' (present) to match tense. Suggestion: answer past-tense questions with past-tense verbs (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had one').

× Yes I do, bike is really commanding my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The student used 'I do' (present response) which mismatches the examiner's present-tense question but more importantly the sentence 'bike is really commanding my country' has multiple issues: singular 'bike' with a general meaning should be plural 'bikes' and the verb 'is commanding' is unnatural here. 'Commanding' is misused; 'popular' expresses the intended meaning. Also include a subject 'I think' for opinion. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and choose appropriate adjectives (e.g., 'popular').

× Since it's easily accessed and affordable, people tend to have a great chance to do it well.

✓ Because they are easy to access and affordable, people tend to have many opportunities to ride them.

The phrase 'easily accessed' is passive and unnatural for people using bikes; 'easy to access' or 'readily available' is better. 'People tend to have a great chance to do it well' is incorrect: 'a great chance' is awkward and 'do it well' is vague. Use 'many opportunities to ride them' to clearly express that people can often ride bikes. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'them' refers to 'bikes'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases (opportunities) and correct pronouns for plural antecedents.