Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on correct verb tenses and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect auxiliaries (use "didn't have" not "don't have"). Provide a precise time reference and a clear outcome.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I learned to ride other people’s bikes little by little, and by the age of eight I could ride confidently.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then add specific reasons with linking words. Use plural agreement and natural phrasing ("bikes are popular" not "it's popular"). Avoid redundancy and tighten sentences. Provide one specific example or statistic if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in small towns. However, many people prefer cars for safety and convenience, so bike use is more common among students and couriers in urban areas.

× Actually, when I was a child, I don't have a bike because I learn to.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I was learning to.

Tense mismatch: the sentence describes past time ('when I was a child') so present simple 'don't have' and 'learn' are incorrect. Use past tense forms: 'didn't have' for possession in the past and a past progressive or past simple for the learning action. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike because I was learning to' or 'I didn't have a bike because I was learning how to ride.'

× I learn, I learn how to ride a bike when I was young, little by little, but I think I thought it would be very hard to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I learned how to ride a bike when I was young, little by little, but I thought it would be very hard to learn.

The clause refers to past events, so 'learn' should be past tense 'learned.' Also 'I think I thought' mixes present and past; because this is recounting past perception, use 'I thought.' Redundant final phrase 'to learn how to ride a bike' can be shortened to 'to learn.'

× Actually it's still popular in our country because riding a bike, it's still quite popular.

✓ Actually, it's still popular in our country because riding a bike is still quite common.

Unnecessary comma splice and repetition; use present simple 'is' for general statements. Replace repeated 'popular' with 'common' to avoid redundancy. Also remove the extra comma and 'it's' that breaks sentence flow.

× Some people still ride a bike, but most of the people they are just ride a car rather riding a bike because it's a little bit dangerous when you ride.

✓ Some people still ride bikes, but most people just drive cars rather than ride bikes because it's a bit dangerous to ride.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and wording. 'Ride a bike' is fine for some people, but 'most of the people they are just ride a car' is ungrammatical—remove redundant pronoun 'they' and use 'most people just drive cars.' Use plural 'bikes' for general statements or use the infinitive. Replace 'rather riding a bike' with 'rather than ride bikes.' Also 'a little bit' can be shortened to 'a bit,' and when describing risk use 'dangerous to ride.'

× because it's a little bit dangerous when you ride.

✓ because it's a bit dangerous to ride.

Use of 'when' is incorrect here; the sentence refers to the general act of riding being dangerous, so use the infinitive 'to ride' after 'dangerous.' Also 'a little bit' is informal; 'a bit' is more concise.