Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Start with a direct topic sentence, use past tense consistently, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and also cycled to my friends' houses after classes. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I felt safe riding alone, and those rides are one of my fondest childhood memories.

Sugestão: Clarify your opinion with correct vocabulary and grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating whether bikes are popular. Then give specific reasons and use linking words (for example, "because", "however"). Avoid unrelated or unclear words and keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer public transport or cars because they commute long distances to work. However, cycling used to be more common in the past, especially in smaller towns where trips were shorter.

× Honestly I had a bike when I was a child and I often go my go on my bike to school and sometimes I take my bike to go play with my friends and that will be an unforgettable memory when I was chill.

✓ Honestly, I had a bike when I was a child and I often went on my bike to school. Sometimes I took my bike to play with my friends, and that was an unforgettable memory when I was a child.

Multiple verbs describe past habitual actions, so they must be in the simple past tense (went, took, was). The original uses present tense forms (go, take) and a future form (will be), which conflicts with the past time frame. Suggestions: use simple past for past habits (I often went, I sometimes took) and correct the time word 'chill' to 'child'. Also add commas for clarity.

× ...and that will be an unforgettable memory when I was chill.

✓ ...and that was an unforgettable memory when I was a child.

The word 'chill' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'child'. Also 'will be' is wrong for a past event; use 'was'. Suggestion: replace 'chill' with 'child' and align verb tense to past.

× Honestly buy aren't used too much in my country because people in my countries I often go by transportation to other place to work or study but they often use by when they were shy more than nowadays.

✓ Bicycles are not used much in my country because people often travel to other places to work or study, and they used bicycles more when they were younger than they do nowadays.

The original sentence has many structural problems: incorrect word 'buy' (should be 'bikes' or 'bicycles'), wrong negation placement, repetition 'my country/ my countries', mixed tenses, and unclear phrases like 'use by' and 'when they were shy'. I interpreted 'shy' as 'younger'. Suggestions: use a clear subject ('Bicycles'), passive or active correct verb forms (are not used, used), plural nouns, and coherent comparative phrase ('more ... than nowadays').

× ...because people in my countries I often go by transportation to other place to work or study...

✓ ...because people in my country often go by public transportation to other places to work or study...

The original mixes 'my countries' and inserts an extra subject 'I' improperly, causing pronoun and subject confusion. Also 'transportation' needs a determiner or adjective ('public transportation') and 'place' should be plural. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I', use singular 'my country' and plural 'places', and specify 'public transportation' for clarity.

× ...but they often use by when they were shy more than nowadays.

✓ ...but they used bicycles more in the past than they do nowadays.

The phrase contains tense problems and incorrect vocabulary. 'Use by' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'used bicycles'. 'Were shy' is likely a wrong word for 'were younger' or 'in the past'. Use simple past 'used' for past habits and present 'do' for the current comparison. Suggestion: write clear comparative structure 'used X more in the past than they do now'.