Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Specific fixes: say “when I was a child,” use contractions consistently or not, change “wasn’t really a fan of bikes,” correct subject-verb agreement (“my older sister had one”), and link ideas with “but” or “however.”

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wasn't really a fan of bikes, but my sisters each had one. However, I always wanted a scooter because it seemed more fun and easier to ride around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Work on grammatical accuracy, word order and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking phrase such as “for example” or “in fact.” Correct errors like “where I came from,” “every little kid gets a bike,” and use present simple appropriately. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In fact, most children get a bike at a young age, and many families encourage cycling for exercise and short trips. For example, I remember parks and streets full of kids riding bikes after school.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'child'. In English we say 'a child' when referring to a non-specific single child. Suggestion: include 'a' when using singular countable nouns in this context.

× I wasn't really fan of bikes.

✓ I wasn't really a fan of bikes.

The construction 'fan of' requires the article 'a' before 'fan' because 'fan' is a singular countable noun. Also 'really' correctly modifies the negative verb phrase. Suggestion: add 'a' to form 'a fan' for correct grammar.

× My sister and my older sister has one, but I always wanted a scooter.

✓ My sister and my older sister have one, but I always wanted a scooter.

The compound subject 'My sister and my older sister' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have', not 'has'. Use 'have' for plural subjects. Suggestion: match the verb to the plural subject.

× Yes, bikes are very popular when I where I came from every like little kid get a bike when they are very young.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular where I come from; almost every little kid gets a bike when they are very young.

Multiple issues corrected according to allowed types: 'where I came from' should be 'where I come from' to match present general fact (present tense); 'every like little kid' is ungrammatical—use 'almost every little kid' or 'every little kid'; 'get' must agree with the singular indefinite subject 'every little kid' so use 'gets'. Also add punctuation for clarity. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual facts, replace informal filler 'like', and ensure subject-verb agreement for 'every'.