Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 用更准确的词汇和语法表达，并保持句子简洁有逻辑。注意单复数、时态和拼写错误，改正病句，添加连接词以使叙述更自然。例如说明谁买的、目的、练习的地点和学习结果的顺序要清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandparents bought it so I could ride to primary school on my own. I practised riding on my quiet street where there were almost no cars, and I learned very quickly.

Sugestão: 注意主谓一致、单复数和词序，用更恰当的词汇描述共享单车系统。避免冗余表达，并用连接词（例如“for example”, “because”）使论述更连贯。可以补充具体例子或比较来丰富内容。

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes in Shanghai. For example, there are many small docking stations where people can unlock a bike with an app for a low fee, so they are a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× Bicycle are very popular in my country, especially shared bicycle in Shanghai.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country, especially shared bicycles in Shanghai.

原句中的名词“Bicycle”和后半句的“shared bicycle”都应该使用复数形式，因为这里指的是普遍存在的多辆自行车而不是单一一辆。中文建议：名词表示总体或多项时要用复数形式，注意主语与谓语的数一致。

× My grandparents bought it for me because they want me right to primary school on my own.

✓ My grandparents bought it for me because they wanted me to ride to primary school on my own.

原句中时态和动词形式错误：一是语境为过去，主句用了过去时“bought”，从句也应使用过去时“wanted”；二是动词短语应为“ride to”而不是“right to”。中文建议：保持时间一致，注意动词拼写和不定式用法（want sb to do sth）。

× So I practice reading in my street where there were almost no cars and learned very quickly.

✓ So I practised riding in my street where there were almost no cars and learned very quickly.

原句中“practice reading”与语境不符，应为练习骑车（riding）而非阅读（reading）。同时前文为过去时，应使用过去式“practised”。中文建议：根据上下文选择正确的动名词形式，注意英式/美式拼写（practised/practiced）。

× There are many small little docklets shared bikes that anyone can unlock for a small fee, so they are convenient and affordable way to get around.

✓ There are many small docking stations and shared bikes that anyone can unlock for a small fee, so they are a convenient and affordable way to get around.

原句存在词汇搭配和冠词缺失问题：“small little docklets”不自然，应改为“small docking stations”或“docks”；“shared bikes”与前项并列需用and；短语“convenient and affordable way”前需不定冠词“a”。中文建议：使用常见搭配（docking stations），并注意并列结构和可数名词前冠词的使用。

× My grandparents bought it for me because they want me right to primary school on my own.

✓ My grandparents bought it for me because they wanted me to ride to primary school on my own.

原句中主句是过去时（bought），从句不应使用现在时“want”，应保持一致为过去时“wanted”。中文建议：主从句的时态应保持一致，注意主语与动词在人称和时态上的一致性。