Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no and timeframe), then give one or two specific supporting details with a linking word. Avoid filler phrases ("let me think", repeated "I think") and small hesitations. Also correct tense and article use (e.g., "I had a small bike" not "I do have").

Exemplo: Yes. I had a small bike until I started high school. For several years it was my main way to travel between home and school, and I used it almost every day for about three years.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and use clearer linking words. Begin with a direct opinion, then contrast generations with a linking phrase like "however" or "nowadays". Use correct vocabulary ("older generations" not "previous generation", "electric bikes" not "electronic or electricity bike"). Provide one concrete reason or example.

Exemplo: Yes and no. Older generations preferred traditional bicycles, but nowadays many people in my hometown use electric bikes. For example, students and commuters choose electric bikes because they are faster, cheaper to run than cars, and easier for uphill routes.

× Let me think, I think I do.

✓ Let me think, I think I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the response should use past tense. Using present tense 'do' is inconsistent. Suggestion: match the past time frame by using past tense verbs (did, had).

× I do have a bike, but I don't think I ride a bike for a long time.

✓ I did have a bike, but I don't think I rode it for a long time.

Mixed tenses and redundant wording create awkward structure. The question is about the past, so 'did have' and 'rode' (past) are appropriate. Also avoid repeating 'a bike'—use the pronoun 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and replace repeated noun with a pronoun.

× I think it was before high school.

✓ I think it was before high school.

Sentence is already correct in tense and meaning; no grammatical change needed. It correctly uses past tense to refer to a time before high school. Suggestion: keep this structure when referring to past time periods.

× I just have a small one that's for my everyday.

✓ I just had a small one that I used every day.

The original mixes present 'have' with past context and uses 'my everyday' incorrectly. Use past tense 'had' and the verb phrase 'used every day' to describe habitual past action. Also 'every day' should be two words. Suggestion: use correct tense and standard adverbial form 'every day'.

× It's umm, transport between school and home.

✓ It was used for transport between school and home.

The sentence incorrectly uses present 'It's' and omits an article; plus 'transport' is better as a noun phrase with 'used for'. Because the context is past, use 'was used for'. Suggestion: match past tense and use 'used for transport' or 'for commuting between school and home'.

× Well, deploy what's popular in previous generation, but in my hometown with the new generation we begin to use the electronic or electricity bike because it's faster, cheaper and relatively safe.

✓ Well, what's popular in the previous generation was different, but in my hometown the new generation has begun to use electric bikes because they are faster, cheaper and relatively safe.

Multiple issues: 'deploy' is incorrect word choice; tense and agreement problems ('we begin' should be present perfect or present continuous for a recent change), 'electronic or electricity bike' is wrong—use 'electric bike', and pronoun agreement for plural 'bikes' requires 'they are'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('electric bikes'), correct tense ('has begun' or 'have begun' depending on subject), and ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel structure when listing adjectives.