Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Reduce filler words (umm) and correct tense and article mistakes (e.g., 'I didn't learn to ride a bike' and 'I started riding a bike in high school').

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I didn’t learn to ride until high school, when the school offered lessons and I finally practiced with friends. As a result, I became comfortable cycling for short trips and commuting to school.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and linking words. Start with a direct opinion, then give a specific reason and an example. Replace vague phrases ('rather popular') with precise ones and correct verbs and articles (e.g., 'the Taipei City government provides').

Exemplo: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country, but they are especially common in Taipei City. For example, the Taipei City government provides a public bike-sharing system, which many people use for short trips between stations, making cycling convenient for commuting and errands.

× Actually not, because umm, in my childhood I didn't learn how to ride a bike.

✓ Actually no, because in my childhood I didn't learn how to ride a bike.

The main issue is word choice not tense: 'not' alone is awkward after a short answer; use 'no'. The rest is correctly in past tense 'didn't learn' to describe childhood. Suggestion: use 'Actually no' or 'Not really' for natural responses.

× So until I'm starting ride a bike is when I'm in high school and at that time the Taipei City government have umm.

✓ I didn't start riding a bike until high school, and at that time the Taipei City government had a program.

Multiple problems: incorrect tense and verb forms. 'I'm starting ride' mixes present progressive with base verb; the correct past reference is 'didn't start riding'. 'Have' should be past 'had' to match 'at that time'. Also restructure the sentence for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events and use gerund after 'start' ('start riding').

× I'm not sure it rather popular in my country, but I'm pretty sure it's popular in Taipei City because the Taipei City government provide the bikes for people that uh, we can transport for umm, step to step.

✓ I'm not sure it's very popular in my country, but I'm pretty sure it's popular in Taipei City because the Taipei City government provides bikes for people so we can travel short distances.

Problems include subject-verb agreement ('the Taipei City government provide' should be 'provides') and awkward phrasing ('it rather popular' should be 'it's rather/very popular'). Also 'we can transport for step to step' is ungrammatical; use 'travel short distances' or 'for short trips'. Maintain present simple for general facts. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'it's' for 'it is', and choose natural collocations like 'travel short distances'.