Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 시제 사용을 바로잡고 문장을 간결하게 만드는 것이 필요합니다. 현재와 과거를 구분하여 말하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하세요. 또한 이유를 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 설명하기 위해 연결어를 사용하세요. 예: 과거에는 자전거를 탔지만 지금은 시간이 없어서 못 탄다는 점을 간결하게 표현하고, ‘used to’와 ‘nowadays’에 맞는 시제를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to ride a bike when I was a child, but I don’t ride one now because I’m very busy with work and have little free time.

Sugestão: 중복을 줄이고 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. ‘it makes’ 같은 어색한 표현 대신 자연스러운 구조로 바꾸고, 연결어를 사용해 의견과 이유를 논리적으로 잇는 연습을 하세요. 또한 ‘almost the people’ 같은 표현 대신 ‘many people’ 또는 ‘most people’처럼 정확한 표현을 쓰세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular these days because many people cycle regularly to improve their fitness and save money on transport. Therefore, cycling has become a common choice for health-conscious commuters.

× Yes, I used to ride a bike, but nowadays I didn't ride a bike because I'm not, I don't, I'm not have enough time, so I I don't have a chance that I ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I used to ride a bike, but nowadays I don't ride a bike because I don't have enough time, so I don't have the chance to ride a bike.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'Nowadays' requires present tense, so 'didn't ride' is incorrect; use 'don't ride' (Present Simple) for habitual present. 'I'm not have' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't have'. 'I don't have a chance that I ride a bike' is awkward; use the infinitive 'to ride a bike' or 'the chance to ride'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with time adverbials, use do-support for negatives in present simple, and use infinitive after 'chance'.

× Yes, I think, uh, many people ride the bike nowadays because it makes, they have, it makes, uh, improve our health. So almost the people try to to it for their health.

✓ Yes, I think many people ride bikes nowadays because it improves our health. So most people try to do it for their health.

Several present tense and word choice errors: 'ride the bike' is better as 'ride bikes' (general plural for habit). 'It makes, ... improve our health' is incorrect structure; use 'it improves our health' with third person singular verb agreement. 'Almost the people' is unidiomatic; use 'most people'. 'Try to to it' has an extra 'to' and 'do it' is the correct verb phrase. Suggestions: Use simple present for general truths, ensure subject-verb agreement ('it improves'), use plural nouns for general statements ('bikes'), and avoid duplicate words.