Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Also correct mistakes: use past tense consistently, remove duplicate words, and replace vague phrases with clearer expressions.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor, so my parents couldn't afford one; as a result, I rarely had the chance to ride. However, I sometimes borrowed neighbors' bikes to play with friends.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and correct word choice and grammar. Begin with a direct statement, then give two specific supporting reasons linked with connectors (for example, because, therefore). Use plural nouns and articles correctly (e.g., 'bicycles', 'the weather', 'many people').

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Because the climate is mild year-round, people can cycle throughout the year, and many urban residents find bikes convenient and affordable for short trips.

× I didn't own a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't own a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed. It uses the past simple negative correctly to state lack of possession in childhood.

× I I come from a very poor family and my parents were not able to buy me a bike and I never get to get a chance to ride a bike.

✓ I come from a very poor family, and my parents were not able to buy me a bike, so I never got a chance to ride one.

Problems: duplicate 'I', mixed present 'I come' with past events and incorrect verb forms. Use 'I come from' is acceptable as a general fact (present simple), but the rest refers to past inability, so use past simple 'were not able' (already present) and change 'never get to get' to 'never got' for past occurrence. Also replace 'a bike' with pronoun 'one' to avoid repetition and add comma and conjunction 'so' to join clauses clearly. Suggestion: keep 'I come from a very poor family' if you mean a general fact; otherwise change to 'I came from' if referring specifically to childhood. Ensure tense consistency: if describing past events, use past verbs (e.g., 'I came from... and my parents were not able...').

× The weather also allows people to for site for for bike all year round.

✓ The weather also allows people to ride bikes all year round.

Errors: extra words 'for site for for' are meaningless and 'ride' (base verb) is required after 'allows someone to'. Also use plural 'bikes' or 'to ride a bike' for generic meaning. 'Allows people to ride bikes all year round' is clear and grammatically correct. Suggestion: after 'allows people to', use base form of verb (infinitive) without 'to' repeated incorrectly.

× And uh, most of the people living in my country own bike.

✓ And, uh, most people living in my country own bikes.

Problems: 'most of the people' is wordy; 'most people' is more natural. 'own bike' lacks plural agreement—use 'own bikes' to indicate general possession. Ensure article/number agreement when speaking generally about a population. Suggestion: use 'most people' and plural 'bikes' for general statements.

× It is very convenient and accessible means of transportation for a lot.

✓ It is a very convenient and accessible means of transportation for many people.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'very', and 'for a lot' is ungrammatical; use 'for many people'. Also 'means' is singular in idea but treated as 'a means' here. Complete, natural sentence: 'It is a very convenient and accessible means of transportation for many people.' Suggestion: include appropriate articles and use 'many people' instead of 'a lot' in formal speech.