Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, give a short topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what the bike looked like, how often you used it, or a brief memory). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six. I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood with my friends, and I remember learning to balance after a few weeks of practice.

Sugestão: The answer is confusing and contains mistakes (wrong words and unclear meaning). To improve, start with a clear topic sentence saying whether bikes are popular, then provide specific reasons or examples (e.g., shared bikes, cycling for commuting, government bike lanes). Use correct vocabulary and simple linking words to connect ideas. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. In recent years shared-bike services have become widespread, and many people use bicycles for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, bags are very popular in China, especially when I was a child.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially; they were popular when I was a child.

The student wrote 'bags' but the question is about 'bikes' (wrong word choice — adjective/noun misuse). Also the temporal phrase 'especially when I was a child' needs clearer connection; use a clause 'they were popular when I was a child' or separate with punctuation. Suggestion: check that the noun matches the topic and connect time phrases clearly.

× Everyone, every family has back recently more shared bikes.

✓ Everyone and every family has recently had more shared bikes.

The original sentence has word order and agreement issues. 'Everyone, every family has' is awkward; use 'Everyone and every family has' for clarity. 'Back recently more shared bikes' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is that families have acquired more shared bikes recently, so use present perfect 'has recently had' to indicate a change up to now. Also place adverb 'recently' before the participle. Suggestion: reorder elements into subject + auxiliary + past participle and place adverbs in conventional positions.