Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Give a direct answer (yes/no) and add one or two brief supporting details. Keep answers natural, concise, and relevant. Use linking words if you add more than one detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and felt very confident on it.

Sugestão: Your answer directly addresses the question and gives reasons, which is good. Improve by using correct pronouns (say “my country”), vary vocabulary, add a linking word, and include a specific example or brief comparison to make it more concrete. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and daily commuting. For example, students and market vendors often cycle to save money and avoid traffic. Moreover, compared with cars or motorcycles, bikes are cheaper to buy and maintain, which makes them a practical choice.

× I think bikes are very popular in your country because a lot of people use it as a transportation medium and it's more affordable to have one than cars or motorcycles.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people use them as a means of transportation and they are more affordable than cars or motorcycles.

The student used 'your country' which is incorrect in response to a question about the student's country; pronouns should match the speaker (use 'my country'). Also 'a lot of people use it' is wrong because 'bikes' is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'them' (this is a subject-pronoun agreement / pronoun reference error). 'Transportation medium' is awkward; 'means of transportation' is the correct collocation. Finally, the clause comparing affordability should compare the plural noun 'bikes' (or use 'they') with plural 'cars or motorcycles': 'they are more affordable than cars or motorcycles.' Suggestions: ensure pronouns refer to the correct speaker ('my' vs 'your'), match pronoun number to the antecedent (singular/plural), and use common collocations such as 'means of transportation.'