Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (um, uh) and incomplete sentences. Also use correct tense (past) and accurate grammar for cause (because, since) and results.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. That was because there was a busy highway near our house, so my parents thought it would be too dangerous. As a result, they didn’t want me to ride a bike alone.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, firstly, secondly). Use comparative grammar correctly (more popular than) and avoid repetition. Provide a brief example or statistic if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are more popular than cars in my country. This is mainly because they are much more affordable and cheaper to maintain. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute short distances and pay far less for fuel and repairs than for a car.

× MMM no I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; use 'didn't have' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits or possessions in the past: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× When I was a child that was a There is a big reason behind that.

✓ When I was a child, there was a big reason behind that.

The original mixes present 'there is' with past 'When I was a child' causing inconsistent tense and redundant words. Remove the extra words and match tense: 'there was' refers to the past. Also add a comma after the adverbial clause for clarity. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and avoid redundant fragments: 'When I was a child, there was a big reason behind that.'

× I always want a bike but uh near my house there is highways so that my parents don't buy me a.

✓ I always wanted a bike, but there were highways near my house, so my parents didn't buy me one.

Multiple issues: tense should be past ('wanted'); subject-verb agreement with 'highways' requires 'there were'; 'so that' is unnecessary/incorrect here—use 'so' to indicate result; 'don't' should be past 'didn't'; 'a' at end is incomplete—use 'one' to refer to 'a bike'. Suggestion: Maintain past tense throughout and correct subject-verb agreement and pronoun/placeholder use: 'I always wanted a bike, but there were highways near my house, so my parents didn't buy me one.'

× As long as I know in my country bikes are most popular than the cars.

✓ As far as I know, bikes are more popular than cars in my country.

Use the correct phrase 'As far as I know' not 'As long as I know'. Comparison should use 'more popular than' not 'most popular than'. Omit the definite article before 'cars' when speaking generally. Also reorder to a natural English word order. Suggestion: Use set phrase and comparative form: 'As far as I know, bikes are more popular than cars in my country.'

× It has a reason behind that because bikes are affordable for individuals and it is most popular and so that people afford bike than car.

✓ The reason is that bikes are affordable for individuals, so people can afford a bike more easily than a car.

The original uses 'It has a reason behind that' which is awkward; better: 'The reason is that'. 'It is most popular' is unclear and redundant. Use 'so' to show result and 'can afford' to express ability. Use 'a bike' and 'a car' for countable nouns in this comparison and 'more easily than' for comparing affordability. Suggestion: Use clear causal phrasing and proper comparative structures: 'The reason is that bikes are affordable for individuals, so people can afford a bike more easily than a car.'