Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear. Start with a correct topic sentence in past tense (e.g. "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child"). Correct vocabulary mistakes (knife → bike) and avoid repetition. Give one brief specific reason and, if helpful, a short consequence or example. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use past tense consistently.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear opinion with supporting detail. Use correct grammar (e.g. "My child doesn't have a bike") and avoid filler words like "uh." Provide a brief reason or example about popularity (e.g. trends, cities vs countryside) and one specific personal detail if relevant. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as "however" or "for example."

Exemplo: I think bikes are still fairly popular, especially in smaller towns, although many children now prefer rollerblades. For example, my child doesn't have a bike yet, so I plan to buy one for their birthday.

× No, I don't have a knife and I was a child because we don't we don't have the money to buy it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we didn't have the money to buy one.

Multiple errors: wrong tense and word choice. The question asked about the past, so use past tense ('didn't have', 'was a child'). 'Knife' is likely a miswording for 'bike' so replace with 'bike'. Repeated phrase 'we don't we don't' is incorrect; use past 'we didn't'. Use the pronoun 'one' instead of repeating the noun. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events and use appropriate noun and pronouns.

× We're just buying bike from the other.

✓ We were just buying bikes from each other.

Problems: incorrect tense and number. The context refers to past actions so use past continuous 'were buying'. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, and 'from the other' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'from each other'. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) to meaning and use correct prepositional phrase.

× I don't know, but these days, uh, children are into rollerblades.

✓ I don't know, but these days children are into rollerblading.

'Rollerblades' is a noun brand/name; more natural to use the gerund 'rollerblading' to describe the activity. The present tense 'are into' is correct. Suggestion: use activity form (verb + -ing) when saying someone enjoys an activity.

× My child has.

✓ My child does.

The fragment 'My child has.' is incomplete and unclear. If the student means 'My child doesn't have one', the correct form is 'My child doesn't have a bike.' If they mean possession in general, 'My child has one' is fine. Suggestion: use a complete clause with subject and appropriate verb; ensure auxiliary 'does/doesn't' for present simple negatives.

× My child don't have a bike so I will get it when their birthday comes.

✓ My child doesn't have a bike, so I will get one when their birthday comes.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'child' is singular, so use 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also 'it' is better as 'one' when referring to 'a bike', and 'their' is acceptable as singular gender-neutral pronoun but could be 'his/her' if preferred. Suggestion: match verb to singular subject and use consistent pronouns.