Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear, accurate and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I did), correct vocabulary (use 'bike' not 'smile' or 'back'), and give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar and pronoun errors (e.g., 'It was a gift from my father.'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a green bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it with my friends every weekend. It was a gift from my father, so I took good care of it and learned to ride quickly.

Sugestão: Be precise and use correct vocabulary and linking words. Begin with a clear opinion, then give 2 specific reasons with examples. Replace incorrect words ('back', 'vote') with correct ones ('bike', 'use'). Use commas or connectors to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use bikes for short trips because they are cheap and good exercise, and many students commute to school on two-wheelers. For example, I often see students and shopkeepers cycling in my neighborhood every morning.

× Well, yes, I had a green smile back when I was a child.

✓ Well, yes, I had a green bicycle when I was a child.

The word 'smile' is contextually incorrect and likely a wrong word choice rather than an article error; however within the provided list the closest applicable error is article/word choice. Replace 'smile' with 'bicycle' to make semantic sense and keep the past tense 'had'. Use 'a' before a singular countable noun 'bicycle'. Suggestion: check vocabulary and ensure the noun matches the intended object.

× I often rolled back with my friends every weekend.

✓ I often rode my bike with my friends every weekend.

The verb 'rolled back' is incorrect for riding a bicycle; the correct verb is 'rode' (past tense of 'ride') and you should specify the object 'my bike' for clarity. 'Every weekend' and 'often' are somewhat redundant; 'often' can be kept or omitted. Suggestion: use accurate verbs for activities and include the object when needed.

× And the back is a gift from my father. She he has.

✓ And the bike was a gift from my father; he bought it for me.

Multiple pronoun and noun errors: 'back' should be 'bike', 'She he has' is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns. Use 'he' to refer to 'my father' and a clear verb phrase 'bought it for me' or 'gave it to me'. Maintain past tense 'was' or 'was a gift' to match 'had' earlier. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents and avoid mixing words.

× People always ride back in short distance, most students ride 2 Wheelers because it's convenient and healthy, and most workers vote.

✓ People often ride bicycles for short distances; most students ride two-wheelers because they are convenient and healthy, and many workers do too.

Several issues: 'ride back in short distance' is incorrect preposition and noun forms — use 'ride ... for short distances'. '2 Wheelers' should be written 'two-wheelers' and treated as plural. 'it's' needs plural agreement with 'two-wheelers' or use 'they are'. 'most workers vote' is likely wrong verb choice; context suggests 'most workers do too' (also ride). Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('for'), plural forms, spell out numbers in writing, and ensure verbs match the intended action.