Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm), correct grammar (use past tense consistently), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use clearer vocabulary (e.g., “too short to reach the pedals”).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father gave me a big red bike, but I was too short to reach the pedals at first, so he had to hold the seat while I learned to balance. This made learning to ride memorable and fun.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement, remove fillers, use plural/singular consistently and correct word forms (e.g., “bikes are popular”, “shared bikes”), and add a concise specific reason or example linked logically. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, shared bikes are widespread: you can scan a QR code to unlock a bike, which makes short trips convenient and inexpensive, especially in cities.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child umm, my dad gave me that that bike and it was red umm, it's a really big 1 and I was so short to get the floor so the first time.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave me that bike, and it was red. It was really big, and I was too short to reach the pedals at first.

The original contains run-on clauses and tense/mood clarity problems. Break into sentences for clarity. 'It's' (present) should be 'It was' to match past context (Past tense issue). 'so short to get the floor' is ungrammatical; use 'too short to reach the pedals' for intended meaning. Also remove duplicate 'that'. Use past tense consistently because the events happened in the past. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense for past events, split long utterances into shorter sentences, and use 'too + adjective + to + verb' for inability.

× Yes, I think bike is a very popular way to commute in China uh, in China we have so many shared bike, which you can scan the QR code and get to ride the bike umm in a very low price.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are a very popular way to commute in China. In China we have many shared bikes, which you can unlock by scanning a QR code and use at a very low price.

Errors include count noun/quantifier agreement and phrasing: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' (use plural when speaking generally) and 'shared bike' should be 'shared bikes'. This fits Grammar Problem Type 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers) and also Subject-verb/number agreement implied. 'Scan the QR code and get to ride the bike' is awkward; use 'unlock by scanning a QR code and use' or 'rent at a low price'. Use 'at a very low price' rather than 'in a very low price'. Suggestion: use plural forms when speaking generally about items, choose appropriate verbs for processes (unlock/ride/use), and use the preposition 'at' with 'price'.