Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence, link supporting details with connectors, and correct mistakes (e.g., word order, tense, and spelling). Aim for 2–4 sentences: state you had a bike, describe it briefly, say who gave it and when, and include one specific memory or feeling. Use linking words like “and”, “so”, or “because” to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. It was a bright pink bicycle that my parents gave me for my sixth birthday, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood. I especially remember racing with my friends after school because it made me feel free and confident.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, complete clauses). Avoid trailing off; finish your thoughts and use linking phrases like “however”, “recently”, and “since”. Mention concrete examples (e.g., reasons for change, statistics, or policies) to be more informative.

Exemplo: Not very popular in the past, but recently cycling has grown in popularity in my country. This change happened because cities improved bike lanes and social attitudes shifted; for example, women were previously discouraged from cycling, but since 2020 there have been legal and cultural changes that allowed more women to ride.

× Yes I remember I had one which color was bright pink and my parents gave it to me for my 6th birthday and I used to Rd. it to neighbors and I really loved that.

✓ Yes, I remember I had one whose color was bright pink; my parents gave it to me for my 6th birthday, and I used to ride it to my neighbors' houses. I really loved it.

Multiple issues fit the 'Verb + -ing form' category and related grammar types: 'used to Rd.' is incorrect because 'Rd.' is an abbreviation and the verb should be in base form after 'used to' followed by the infinitive without to (used to ride). Also 'which color was bright pink' is unidiomatic; use the relative pronoun 'whose' for possession. 'ride' is the correct verb (not 'Rd.'). Possessive for neighbors requires plural possessive 'neighbors\''. Finally, ending reference should be 'I really loved it' instead of 'that'. Suggestion: use 'used to ride' for habitual past actions, 'whose' for possession, write full verbs, and use appropriate pronouns and possessive forms.

× To be honest, not in the past, but recently it has been widespread in our country and the government have not allowed women to ride a bike, but since 2020 they.

✓ To be honest, not in the past, but recently bicycles have become widespread in our country, and the government had not allowed women to ride a bike, but since 2020 they have allowed it.

There are subject-verb agreement and tense issues. 'it has been widespread' is awkward because 'bicycles' (plural) is the logical subject, so use 'bicycles have become widespread.' 'the government have' is incorrect in American English where 'government' is singular; use 'the government had not allowed' to show past restriction and then 'they have allowed it' to complete the contrast. Also the sentence fragment 'but since 2020 they.' is incomplete; finish with 'they have allowed it.' Suggestions: match subject number and verb form, make tense contrast clear (past restriction vs change since 2020), and complete sentences.