Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement), clarity and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct errors: use past tense consistently, say who taught you, and remove repetition. For example, say you were given the bike at age seven, your mother taught you, and mention how long it took or how you felt. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I got my first bike when I was seven, and my mother taught me how to ride it. At first I was nervous, but after a few lessons I could ride on my own, so I felt very proud.

Sugestão: Work on grammar (singular/plural and verb forms), coherence and specificity. Start with a direct statement about popularity in your country, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid vague or contradictory claims (e.g., saying 'in every country'). Mention particular groups who use bikes or contexts (commuting, recreation) to be more precise.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who enjoy outdoor activities. For example, many families take their children to parks on weekends, and bicycles are a common way to travel short distances in towns.

× Yes, I got a bike when I was 7 years old and my mom teach me how to ride a bike and to promise me can ride by by myself.

✓ Yes, I got a bike when I was 7 years old, and my mom taught me how to ride it and promised I could ride by myself.

Errors: 'teach' and 'promise' are in the present tense but the sentence refers to past events, so they should be past tense 'taught' and 'promised'. Also 'can' should be changed to 'could' for past ability. Suggestions: Keep verbs describing past events in past tense; use 'could' for past ability; combine clauses with commas and use appropriate pronouns ('it' for the bike).

× In my opinion I think bikes is very popular in Charles group because all child like goes outside and have fun and bikes is a good activity outdoor so I think it is very popular in every country.

✓ In my opinion, I think bikes are very popular in Charles' group because all children like going outside and having fun, and biking is a good outdoor activity, so I think they are very popular in every country.

Multiple agreement and form errors: 'bikes is' should be 'bikes are' to match plural subject; 'child' should be plural 'children'; verb phrases with preferences or activities require gerunds: 'like going' and 'having fun'; 'bikes is a good activity outdoor' is awkward — use 'biking is a good outdoor activity'; pronoun reference 'they' clarifies 'bikes'. Suggestions: Ensure subjects and verbs agree in number; use correct plural nouns; use gerunds after verbs like 'like'; prefer natural noun forms ('biking') and adjective order ('outdoor activity').