Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говоріть чітко і лаконічно: почніть з прямої відповіді (topic sentence), потім додайте одну або дві короткі деталі. Уникайте повторів і зайвих пауз («uh») та неправильних часових виразів. Наприклад, скажіть скільки років ви навчаєтесь правильно: «I have been studying at school for 11 years.»

Exemplo: I am a student. I have been studying at the same school for 11 years, and I’m currently in the eleventh grade.

Sugestão: Давайте ясну відповідь з однією-двома деталями. Уникайте незавершених фраз («I have a many. I don't know»). Якщо хочете згадати про кількість учнів або предмети — скажіть конкретно. Наприклад: "I study at School No. 2 in Lviv. It’s a medium-sized school with about 500 students."

Exemplo: I study at School No. 2 in Lviv. It’s a medium-sized school with around five hundred students and a strong science department.

Sugestão: Дайте пряму відповідь і надайте конкретні причини з логічними зв'язками. Використовуйте зв'язки (because, so, and) та уникайте зайвих «uh». Замість загальних фраз назвіть 2-3 конкретні причини (друзі, вчителі, їжа).

Exemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to study because I have many friends there and the teachers are very supportive, and the school canteen serves good, affordable meals.

Sugestão: Відповідайте конкретно: назвіть одне або два зміни, які б ви хотіли бачити, і поясніть чому. Уникайте нечітких фраз і протиставлень без змісту. Наприклад: «Yes, I would like better sports facilities because…»

Exemplo: Yes, I would make some changes. For example, I would improve the sports facilities because we don’t have a proper gym, and I would update the library so students have better study resources.

Sugestão: Дайте чітку структуру: почніть з головного плану (where/how), поясніть причини та коротко скажіть про очікувані результати. Уникайте невизначень («maybe M many friends») й зайвих пауз. Наприклад: «I plan to study at X University in Italy to specialise in Y so I can get a good job.»

Exemplo: I plan to study at the University of Disciana in Italy to study international business. I hope this will help me get a good job in an international company and meet people from different countries.

× Uh, I'm a student, I'm studying in school 11 years.

✓ Uh, I'm a student; I have been studying at school for 11 years.

The student used present continuous 'I'm studying' with a duration '11 years', which requires present perfect continuous or present perfect. Use 'have been studying' or 'have studied' and correct preposition 'at school' and include 'for' before the duration. Suggestion: 'I have been studying at school for 11 years.'

× I'm studying in Lviv in a school #2 I have a many. I don't know.

✓ I'm studying in Lviv at School No. 2. I have many friends. I'm not sure what else to say.

Use 'in Lviv' is correct, but schools take the preposition 'at' (at School No. 2). 'I have a many' is ungrammatical; use 'I have many friends.' Also add a clear ending instead of 'I don't know.' Suggestion: 'I'm studying in Lviv at School No. 2. I have many friends.'

× Yes, this is a good place. I like the place. I have many friends and uh, I like to teachers uh. And a good food.

✓ Yes, it is a good place. I like it. I have many friends, and I like the teachers. The food is good.

Pronoun use: repeat 'the place' is awkward—use 'it'. 'I like to teachers' is incorrect; use 'I like the teachers' (object with definite article). 'And a good food' should be 'The food is good'—use a subject and verb or 'good food' without 'a'. Suggestion: 'Yes, it is a good place. I like it. I have many friends, and I like the teachers. The food is good.'

× Yes, I want to the place, uh, many change, but I don't like uh. To play.

✓ Yes, I want the place to change a lot, but I don't like to play there.

Sentence structure is poor. 'I want to the place, many change' is ungrammatical. Reorder: 'I want the place to change a lot.' 'I don't like to play' needs an object or place: 'to play there.' Suggestion: 'Yes, I want the place to change a lot, but I don't like to play there.'

× I want to study in Italy University Disciana. I want to a good job and uh, I want to find maybe M many friends and, uh, I like that place.

✓ I want to study at the University of Disciana in Italy. I want to get a good job, and I hope to make many friends. I like that place.

Use 'study at the university' (preposition). 'I want to a good job' needs infinitive: 'I want to get a good job.' 'Find maybe M many friends' is unclear; use 'hope to make many friends.' Maintain future intention with 'want to' and 'hope to.' Suggestion: 'I want to study at the University of Disciana in Italy. I want to get a good job, and I hope to make many friends.'