Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更直接并用更地道的表达。尽量避免多余的填充词（如“Well”）和语法小错误，句子可更自然例如说“I’m a fourth-year university student.”若需补充，可用一两句说明学校和专业。

Exemplo: I’m a fourth-year university student studying finance. I’m currently completing my final year and preparing for my master’s studies.

Sugestão: 内容说明清楚但表达不够自然且有语法/搭配问题（"curious about the money and also the number"）。避免重复的开头词，改用更准确的词汇描述兴趣，例如“interested in finance and numbers”或“fascinated by financial markets and quantitative analysis”。

Exemplo: I study at Macau University of Science and Technology in Macau, China, majoring in finance. I’m interested in finance because I enjoy working with numbers and learning how markets operate.

Sugestão: 回答结构可以更紧凑自然。避免重复表达（“I love… very much”与“because”后重复信息）。使用衔接词并给出具体例子会更好，例如说明教授如何专业或和同学相处的具体情况。

Exemplo: Yes, it’s a great place to study. The professors are very professional and supportive, and my classmates are friendly, so it’s easy to collaborate on group projects and learn from each other.

Sugestão: 回答含混且有语法错误与表达不连贯（如“perfect city in to some extent”，“add it the bus line”）。应先直接回答，然后具体说明希望改进的方面并解释理由。可以说交通不便、希望增加公交线路以方便学生通勤。

Exemplo: Generally Macau is a great city, but I would improve the public transport. For example, I’d like more bus routes and more frequent services so students can travel to campus more conveniently.

Sugestão: 表达应更明确、语法更准确。避免模糊词（如“maybe”反复用），改为清晰的计划并说明原因与目标。可提到想读研的具体原因和职业目标来增加内容深度。

Exemplo: I plan to continue my studies and pursue a master’s degree, possibly in Hong Kong or Australia, because I want to deepen my knowledge in finance and prepare for a long-term career in the financial industry.

× Well, I am a college student in my year four.

✓ Well, I am a college student in my fourth year.

原句“in my year four”中名词短语顺序和表达不正确。英语中表示“我大四”应使用序数词+year的结构，即“in my fourth year”。建议使用序数词（first, second, third, fourth）并把序数词放在名词前。

× Well, I study in Macau, China at Macau University of Science and Technology.

✓ Well, I study in Macau, China, at the Macau University of Science and Technology.

地点表达中校名通常加定冠词“the”，且在列举国家/城市与校名时应在城市后加逗号使句子更清晰。建议在大学名前加“the”，并在“Macau, China”后加逗号。

× I love this field because I'm curious about the money and also the number.

✓ I love this field because I'm curious about money and numbers.

“the money”与“the number”使用了不必要的定冠词且单复数不当。一般泛指“钱”和“数字”时用不可数或复数形式：money（不可数），numbers（复数）。建议去掉定冠词并使用正确的数形式。

× I love my university very much because the professors there are very professional and the classmates are very friendly and we are easy to get well with each other.

✓ I love my university very much because the professors there are very professional and the classmates are very friendly, and we get along well with each other.

原句中“we are easy to get well with each other”结构不正确。正确表达应使用动词短语“get along with”表示“相处融洽”，并用副词“well”。建议改为“we get along well with each other”。

× Well, I think Macau is a perfect city in to some extent, but to be honest one thing I hope they can be improved is that the bus, I hope they can add it the bus line.

✓ Well, I think Macau is a perfect city to some extent, but to be honest, one thing I hope can be improved is the bus service; I hope they can add more bus lines.

原句有多处问题：短语“in to some extent”错误，正确是“to some extent”；“one thing I hope they can be improved”被动/主语使用错误，应为“one thing I hope can be improved”或“one thing I hope they can improve”；“the bus, I hope they can add it the bus line”语序和用词混乱，应表述为“add more bus lines”或“add a bus line”。建议使用“to some extent”，简化从句并使用“bus service”及“add more bus lines”。

× Well, my study plan is to continue study and to gain my master degree in maybe Hong Kong or Australia because as I said, I am curious about finance field, and I hope I can work a long way in it.

✓ Well, my study plan is to continue studying and to obtain my master's degree maybe in Hong Kong or Australia, because as I said, I am interested in the field of finance, and I hope I can work in it for a long time.

多处语法问题：1) “to continue study”应使用动名词或不定式结构，“to continue studying”更自然；2) “to gain my master degree”中“master degree”应为“master's degree”且“gain”用法可改为“obtain”；3) “in maybe Hong Kong or Australia”语序不当，应为“maybe in Hong Kong or Australia”；4) “curious about finance field”搭配错误，通常说“interested in the field of finance”；5) “work a long way in it”不符合习惯表达，应为“work in it for a long time”。建议调整为上述修正句。