Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子语法和时态有错误，表达不够自然。回答应直接用主题句并用1-2个支持细节。可以把动词时态和冠词修正，减少冗余。举例说明你的专业和所在城市即可。

Exemplo: I'm a student. I study broadcasting and hosting at a university in Nanjing, where I focus on presentation skills and media production.

Sugestão: 句子断裂且用词不当（specialist school, fast race），缺少连贯衔接。回答应先给出学校地点，再具体说明学校特点，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I study at a specialized media college in Nanjing, which focuses on journalism and public speaking, and the city offers many cultural and professional opportunities.

Sugestão: 回答较清楚但有填充词（umm, uh）和语法问题（fast-paced as adjective needs noun）。建议删除口头语，用一到两个具体理由并用连接词组织句子。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Nanjing is fast-paced and offers many internship and networking opportunities for students, and the climate is mild throughout the year.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱且语法错误，表达不清。应先直接回答是否希望改变，再列出1–2个具体改进并说明原因，使用连接词连接想法。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the campus to add more dining options and improve the landscaping, because better food choices and green spaces would make studying there more enjoyable.

Sugestão: 语法（deep majoring）、词序不当和含糊（maybe）影响表达。建议先说明总体计划，再具体说明专业和目标学校，使用清晰的结构和正确动词形式。

Exemplo: In the future I plan to further specialize in media and public speaking by pursuing a master's degree in Australia, possibly at the University of Melbourne.

× I'm a student right now I studying in Nanjing and I study about broadcasting and hosting.

✓ I'm a student right now. I am studying in Nanjing and I study broadcasting and hosting.

句中缺少助动词“am”以构成现在进行时；另外原句连成一长句需加句号或连词分开。建议：现在进行时结构为 am/is/are + -ing，改为“I am studying”。“study about”不自然，改为“study broadcasting and hosting”。

× I study in Nanjing, a very specialist school about media and some public speaking. Is a very good city to live with a very fast race.

✓ I study in Nanjing at a specialist school for media and public speaking. It is a very good city to live in with a very fast pace.

原句主谓不一致与句子片段错误。“Is a very good city”缺主语，应改为“It is”。“specialist school about”搭配不当，改为“specialist school for”。“race”用词错误，应为“pace”。另外需要介词“in”与“live in”。

× Yes, definitely umm. This city has umm, fast-paced and uh affords many career opportunities for students and the weather is very good all the year.

✓ Yes, definitely. This city is fast-paced and affords many career opportunities for students, and the weather is very good all year.

“has fast-paced”措辞错误，应使用系动词 be 表示城市“是快节奏的（is fast-paced）”。“all the year”不地道，应为“all year”或“throughout the year”。句子可用逗号连接并保持时态一致。

× Yes, I want my school to and the extra restaurant and some beautiful landscape so that maybe I study there will more happy.

✓ Yes, I want my school to add an extra restaurant and some beautiful landscaping so that maybe I will be happier studying there.

原句语序混乱，缺动词与不定式结构错误。“want my school to and the extra restaurant”不完整，应为“want my school to add an extra restaurant”。“landscape”名词需改为动名词/名词短语“landscaping”。“I study there will more happy”语法错误，正确为“I will be happier studying there”。建议注意不定式结构和形容词比较级（more happy → happier）。

× In the future I want to deep majoring in media and the public speaking so I will have a master degree in Australia, maybe in the University of Melbourne.

✓ In the future I want to major deeply in media and public speaking, so I will get a master's degree in Australia, maybe at the University of Melbourne.

“deep majoring”结构错误，应为“major deeply”或更自然的“major in depth”，这里用“want to major in media and public speaking”更合适。“have a master degree”搭配问题，应说“get a master's degree”。介词“in the University of Melbourne”常用“at the University of Melbourne”。时态需保持将来（will get）或 present for plans;此处使用“will get”更清晰。