Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence ("I'm a student."), then give one or two specific details (school name/grade). Avoid filler sounds ("uh") and verb errors (use correct tense/forms). Use linking only if adding detail.

Exemplo: I'm a student. I study at UH High School and I'm in the final year, eleventh grade.

Sugestão: Answer directly then add one or two clear, specific details. Use correct prepositions and article forms ("the nearest school to my home", "the 13th school of the district"), and avoid repetition. Keep sentences short and natural.

Exemplo: I study at the school nearest to my home, which is called the 13th School of the District. It's one of the most popular schools in my city.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two reasons using linking words ("because", "because of"). Remove hesitations and redundant phrases. Be specific about what makes it better.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because the teachers are experienced and there are many extracurricular clubs that help students learn beyond lessons.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific examples of changes, using clear reasons and linking words ("because", "for example"). Avoid repetition. Mention specific areas to rebuild (classrooms, bathrooms, library) and state why.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. The building is over 30 years old, so it needs renovation. For example, classrooms and the bathrooms should be rebuilt, and the library needs new furniture and better lighting.

Sugestão: Give a clear plan statement then provide specific reasons and intended destination/field. Avoid generalizations and negative absolute claims about a country. Use correct nouns and phrasing ("study abroad", "higher education"). Keep it structured: plan, reasons, specifics (country/subject).

Exemplo: I plan to study abroad for my university degree because I believe I will find stronger programs and more research opportunities. For example, I hope to apply to engineering programs in Poland or Germany.

× UH, I'm a student and I'm study in the UH school in the last grade in the 11th.

✓ UH, I'm a student and I study at UH School; I'm in the last grade, 11th.

The student used the wrong verb form 'I'm study' instead of 'I study' (pronoun + verb error) and awkward phrasing for grade and school. Use subject pronoun I with the simple present 'study'. Use 'at' for institutions and place ordinal before grade number for clarity.

× I'm studying the nearest school from my home and it's 13th school of a lesson and it's the most popular school in the my city.

✓ I study at the school nearest to my home; it's School No. 13 and it's the most popular school in my city.

Mix of progressive and simple present is inconsistent; use simple present 'I study' for regular situation. Preposition 'nearest to' or 'nearest' is needed; '13th school of a lesson' is incorrect—use 'School No. 13'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'my city'.

× Uh, to be honest, I don't know, but uh, if I, if I'm comparing in the with other schools, I think yes, it would be better to study there than in others.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I don't know, but if I compare it with other schools, I think it would be better to study there than at others.

Use simple present 'compare' for a general condition rather than 'I'm comparing'. Incorrect preposition and article use 'in the with' should be 'compare it with'. Use 'at others' or 'in other schools' for comparison. Keep conditional wording consistent.

× Yes, definitely, as there is a lot of different places in our schools that we need to rebuild because it's very old and it has been, has been there for 30 years.

✓ Yes, definitely, because there are a lot of different places in our school that need to be rebuilt; it's very old and has been there for 30 years.

Use plural agreement 'there are' with 'a lot of places' instead of 'there is a lot of different places'. 'Schools' vs 'school' should match context—if referring to their school, use singular. Remove repeated 'has been'. Use 'need to be rebuilt' (no 'we') for passive necessity.

× Uh, in my PR, in my priorities, I want to study uh, yeah, abroad because in the Ukrainians there is no, no good, uh, uh, higher education at all.

✓ Uh, in my priorities, I want to study abroad because in Ukraine there is no good higher education.

'In the Ukrainians' is incorrect—use country name 'in Ukraine'. Remove duplicated negatives and filler words. 'No good higher education' is clearer than 'no, no good, uh, uh, higher education at all'.

× And I would like to prefer to go, uh, universities. That is, is special.

✓ And I would prefer to go to universities abroad; that is my goal.

'Would like to prefer to' is redundant—use either 'would like to' or 'would prefer'. Use infinitive 'to go to universities'. 'That is, is special' is ungrammatical; replace with a clear phrase like 'that is my goal'.