Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接且相关，但存在语法错误与冗长表达。注意动词时态与搭配（例如“keep studying”应为“keeping studying”或更自然的“continuing to study”），避免重复（“不必要的重复‘high school’两次’）。可把句子拆成一到两句，用更地道的短语表达目标。

Exemplo: I'm a final-year high school student. I'm continuing to study hard so I can apply to a good university next year.

Sugestão: 内容完整但句子较长且有小错误（‘the middle of Taiwan’ 更自然为 ‘central Taiwan’；‘the high school named’ 可简化）。可用一至两句回答并用连接词自然衔接观点与理由。

Exemplo: I study at Washington High School in central Taichung. It's a pleasant place because the teachers are very friendly and supportive.

Sugestão: 回答包含举例但有时态与语法错误（‘Yet it is’ 不自然；‘I have once felt an important exam’ 应为 ‘I was once stressed about an important exam’；动词形式错误如 ‘tell’→‘told’，‘cheers me up’→‘cheered me up’）。建议用清晰的主题句，并用一两句具体例子支持，注意时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, it is. For example, I was once very stressed about an important exam, but my teacher told me not to worry and cheered me up, which boosted my confidence.

Sugestão: 观点明确但表达重复且有词汇错误（‘phase food problems’ 不合适；‘more healthier’ 冗余，正确为 ‘healthier’；被动语态与因果关系表达混乱）。建议简化并用准确词汇说明问题与期望的改变，最多两句并提供具体改进措施。

Exemplo: To be honest, I'd like the school to replace the cafeteria. Recently there were scandals about unhealthy cooking oil, so I hope the school can offer healthier and more affordable meals, for example by sourcing food from certified suppliers.

Sugestão: 回答目标明确但表达不够地道与具体（‘have more license’ 不清楚，应说明是哪种证书或资格；句子冗长，可用一到两句具体说明计划）。建议明确列出具体行动（比如考取哪些证书、准备哪些考试）并用连接词说明目的。

Exemplo: I plan to study harder and obtain relevant qualifications, such as English proficiency certificates and subject-related diplomas, so I can strengthen my application to a top university.

× Well, I'm currently a high school student in my last year of high school, so right now I'm just keep studying and working hard in order to have the chance to apply to an ideal university in the future.

✓ Well, I'm currently a high school student in my last year of high school, so right now I'm just keeping studying and working hard in order to have the chance to apply to an ideal university in the future.

问题类型：现在时/动词+ -ing 形式（8）。原句中使用“keep studying”不符合英语中表示持续动作时的正确形式；应使用动名词/现在分词形式“keeping”或更自然地改为“continuing to study”。建议改为“keeping studying”或“continuing to study”以表示正在持续的动作。

× Well, I'm currently studying in the high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung, the middle of Taiwan, and I believe my school is a very pleasant place to study because the teachers are friendly and supportive.

✓ Well, I'm currently studying at Washington High School, which is located in Taichung, in the middle of Taiwan, and I believe my school is a very pleasant place to study because the teachers are friendly and supportive.

问题类型：介词使用错误（11）。英语中通常说“study at a school”而不是“study in the high school named...”。另外表示位置时应说“in the middle of Taiwan”，前面应加介词“in”。建议把“in the high school named Washington High School”改为“at Washington High School”，并把“the middle of Taiwan”前加“in”。

× Yet it is because as I just said, the teachers are friendly and supportive.

✓ Yes, it is, because as I just said, the teachers are friendly and supportive.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句开头使用“Yet it is”不符合上下文表达肯定的意思，且衔接词使用不当。应使用“Yes, it is”或“Actually, it is”来肯定前一问题的回答，并将从句用逗号分开。建议改为“Yes, it is, because...”以使句子通顺自然。

× To give an example, I have once felt an important exam and my teacher tell me to not worry about it and cheers me up.

✓ To give an example, I once failed an important exam and my teacher told me not to worry about it and cheered me up.

问题类型：过去时错误（5）和动词形式/主谓一致（2/27）。原句中“have once felt an important exam”用词错误，应为“failed an important exam”；时态应为过去式“failed”，后半句“my teacher tell me”应为过去式“told me”，并且“cheers me up”应为过去式“cheered me up”。建议将相关动词改为过去式以一致描述过去发生的事件。

× So that really makes me have more confidence on my studies.

✓ So that really makes me have more confidence in my studies.

问题类型：介词使用错误（11）。英语中常用介词“in”搭配“confidence in something”，而不是“confidence on”。建议把“confidence on my studies”改为“confidence in my studies”。

× Well to be honest I will really want my school to have a new cafeteria because nowadays our school has phase food problems because it was accused that they use bad oil.

✓ Well, to be honest, I really want my school to have a new cafeteria because nowadays our school has food safety problems; it was accused that they used bad oil.

问题类型：情态动词/表达方式（4）和过去时（5）及词汇搭配。原句中“will really want”时态和语气不自然，应用“really want”。“phase food problems”为错误词组，应为“food safety problems”。“it was accused that they use bad oil”中应使用过去时“used”。建议删去不必要的“will”，修正词组并统一使用过去时描述被指控的行为。

× So I would really want my school to provide more healthier and affordable meals every day.

✓ So I would really want my school to provide healthier and more affordable meals every day.

问题类型：形容词或副词使用错误（13）和形容词顺序（18）。“more healthier”是冗余且错误的比较结构，应使用“healthier”。当两个形容词并列时，一般把形容词顺序调整为“healthier and more affordable”。建议删除“more”与“healthier”并调整为“healthier and more affordable”。

× Well, for my future study plans, I plan to study harder and have more license in order to make myself more competitive in the future and let myself be able to apply to an ideal university.

✓ Well, for my future study plans, I plan to study harder and obtain more certifications in order to make myself more competitive in the future and be able to apply to an ideal university.

问题类型：动词-ing/现在时及词汇搭配（8/6）。原句中“have more license”用法不自然，正确表达应为“obtain more certifications”或“get more licenses/certificates”。另外“let myself be able to apply”结构不自然，应直接用“be able to apply”。建议用更地道的表达“obtain more certifications”并把“let myself be able to”改为“be able to”。