Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I am currently a student"). Avoid repeating location details unless asked. Use correct tense and prepositions (e.g., "I recently completed my degree in Arts at Government PG College, Hisar, Haryana"). Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and avoid unnecessary words.

Exemplo: I am currently a student. I recently completed my undergraduate degree in Arts at Government PG College, Hisar, Haryana, and now I plan to pursue further studies.

Sugestão: Answer directly and politely without challenging the examiner. Start with a direct sentence naming the institution and its location, then give one brief positive detail. Correct institution name and spelling (e.g., "Government PG College, Hisar").

Exemplo: I study at Government PG College in Hisar, Haryana. It is a pleasant campus with friendly staff and good facilities.

Sugestão: Be fluent and specific. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two concise supporting reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: Yes, it is. It has good facilities that support learning, such as a free library and campus Wi‑Fi, and for example the college runs special doubt‑clearing classes every Saturday.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a recommendation and reasons. Use clear structure: state the change, then explain why and give one suggestion. Avoid fillers and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'canteen', 'crowded').

Exemplo: Yes. I would like the college to expand the canteen because it is very small and becomes overcrowded during break times, making it difficult to find a seat. Adding more seating and serving counters would help.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement of your plan, then give specific reasons and a brief detail about the country or subject if possible. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'cultures', 'since childhood') and linkers like 'because' and 'as'.

Exemplo: I plan to study for a master's degree abroad because I have always wanted to explore new cultures and countries. For example, I hope to study in the UK to gain international experience and improve my academic skills.

× Now I'm student, recently I have completed my graduation in the art stream in Government Physic College Hisar which are located in Haryana state.

✓ Now I'm a student. Recently I completed my graduation in the arts stream at Government Physics College, Hisar, which is located in Haryana state.

Errors: missing article before 'student' and 'a' is required; 'have completed my graduation' should be simple past 'completed' because speaking about a finished event; 'art stream' should be 'arts stream'; college name likely 'Physics' not 'Physic'; use preposition 'at' for institutions; 'which are located' should be 'which is located' to agree with singular 'College'. Suggestions: add articles ('a', 'the') where needed, use simple past for completed actions, correct nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Now I want to go my pursuing degree.

✓ Now I want to pursue my degree abroad.

Error: incorrect verb phrase 'go my pursuing'; should use infinitive 'pursue' after 'want to'. Also add 'abroad' to match context and place 'my' before 'degree'. Suggestions: use 'want to' + base verb (infinitive) and arrange possessive before the noun.

× I have already mentioned I live in Hassan which is located in Haryana state.

✓ I already mentioned that I live in Hisar, which is located in Haryana state.

Errors: tense and word choice ('have already mentioned' can be 'already mentioned'); missing 'that' for clarity; place name likely 'Hisar' not 'Hassan'. Suggestions: use simpler past reference 'I already mentioned', include 'that' optionally, and use correct place names.

× Where do you study? I study in government physical college Hisar and it is a beautiful college.

✓ I study at Government Physics College, Hisar, and it is a beautiful college.

Errors: use preposition 'at' for institutions; capitalize proper noun and use correct form 'Physics' not 'physical'; include comma before 'Hisar'. Suggestions: use 'study at' and proper capitalization for institution names.

× Definitely, uh, my college is a good place especially for studies because my college provide different type of uh, amenities, special amenities such as Free Library, Wi-Fi, and also every Saturday he organized a special doubt class for a particular subject.

✓ Definitely, my college is a good place especially for studying because my college provides different types of amenities, such as a free library and Wi-Fi, and every Saturday it organizes special doubt-clearing classes for particular subjects.

Errors: 'for studies' -> 'for studying' (gerund form); subject-verb agreement 'college provide' -> 'college provides'; 'different type' -> 'different types of' or 'different types'; 'Free Library' -> 'a free library'; pronoun 'he organized' incorrect for college; use 'it organizes'; 'doubt class' better as 'doubt-clearing class' and plural 'classes' for repeated events. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, use gerunds for activities, correct pronouns for institutions, and pluralize/count nouns appropriately.

× Uh, if I get a chance, I will change my call is canteen area, because now canteen area is very small and most of the time we feel lot of difficulties when specially in my free time, uh, I like to increase canting area.

✓ If I get a chance, I will change the canteen area because it is very small and we often have many difficulties, especially during my free time. I would like to expand the canteen area.

Errors: 'change my call is canteen area' is ungrammatical; missing articles ('the canteen area'); awkward clauses and word order; 'we feel lot of difficulties' -> 'we have many difficulties' or 'we face a lot of difficulties'; 'specially in my free time' -> 'especially during my free time'; 'increase canting area' -> 'expand the canteen area'. Suggestions: simplify sentences, use correct articles, improve word order, and choose appropriate verbs ('expand', 'improve').

× Recently, I have completed my graduation and now I want to go abroad for my master's degree because I like to explore new culture, new countries since my childhood and it is my childhood dream.

✓ Recently, I completed my graduation, and now I want to go abroad for my master's degree because I have liked exploring new cultures and countries since my childhood, and it has been my childhood dream.

Errors: 'have completed' can be 'completed' (simple past) when stating a recent completed action; 'I like to explore new culture, new countries since my childhood' needs present perfect 'have liked' to show a continuing preference from childhood; 'culture' should be plural 'cultures'; 'it is my childhood dream' -> 'it has been my childhood dream' to show duration. Suggestions: use present perfect for experiences continuing to present, pluralize count nouns, and adjust aspect to show duration.