Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng còn thiếu chi tiết và một câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn. Hãy mở rộng bằng một câu giới thiệu rõ ràng (ví dụ: bạn đang học cấp nào hoặc ngành gì), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (dùng hiện tại đơn đúng) và giới hạn dài không quá 3–4 câu. Nên dùng từ nối nếu thêm thông tin.

Exemplo: I'm currently a student at Hebron High School, studying general senior secondary courses. I enjoy subjects like mathematics and English, which I study several times a week.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm sai cấu trúc và thông tin không rõ ràng (ví dụ 'see Vietnam' không hợp lý). Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu nơi học, rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về trường (vị trí, đặc điểm). Tránh lặp từ, sửa ngữ pháp (many teachers / friendly classmates).

Exemplo: I study at Hebron High School in Tengah, a town in Vietnam. The school is well-known locally for its experienced teachers and friendly classmates.

Sugestão: Nội dung lặp và có thông tin mâu thuẫn (nhắc đến Taiwan city trong khi trước đó là Vietnam). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh sai quốc gia, dùng thì đúng (teachers are), và kết hợp các lý do bằng liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để chứng minh vì sao bạn thích trường.

Exemplo: Yes, it's a great place to study because the teachers are very supportive and the classmates are friendly. For example, teachers often give extra help after class, which helps me improve quickly.

Sugestão: Ý nêu rõ vấn đề nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (can can, was/were) và cấu trúc chưa mạch lạc. Nên nêu một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó liệt kê 1–2 vấn đề cụ thể và gợi ý giải pháp, dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like some improvements, especially to the facilities. For instance, many toilets are broken and the classrooms need better ventilation, so fixing those would create a more comfortable study environment.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời mơ hồ, nhiều lặp và ngữ pháp sai (I have, I have; which can start). Thông tin về trường/đất nước không chính xác (Baguio is in the Philippines). Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu kế hoạch, rồi cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (đại học nào, ngành học, lý do), dùng từ nối để giải thích.

Exemplo: In the future I hope to study engineering at a reputable university in Vietnam because I want to learn technical skills. For example, I plan to apply to a technical university that offers strong practical courses in mechanics and electronics.

× Currently I'm a student.

✓ Currently I am a student.

The contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but in formal transcripts it's clearer to use 'I am'. No grammatical error; this is a style suggestion to match formality and tense consistency.

× Now I study in Hebron High School, the best school in Tengah, see Vietnam and in there have a lot of good teacher and friendly friends.

✓ Now I study at Hebron High School, the best school in Tengah, C?u?ng Vietnam, and there are a lot of good teachers and friendly friends.

Use 'study at' for institutions, not 'study in'. Place names should be capitalized and corrected if necessary. Use 'there are' to introduce plural nouns and pluralize 'teacher' to 'teachers'. 'See' appears incorrect for the country name and was adjusted to a plausible name. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns.

× I think it's so good because my student is one of the best school in Taiwan city.

✓ I think it's very good because my school is one of the best schools in Taichung City.

'My student' is incorrect; context requires 'my school'. Use 'one of the best schools' with plural 'schools' after 'one of the'. 'Taiwan city' is unclear; replaced with a likely city name 'Taichung City'. 'So' is informal; 'very' is more appropriate in formal correction.

× The teachers were so excellent and friendly.

✓ The teachers are very excellent and friendly.

The question is about the current school, so present tense 'are' is appropriate rather than past 'were'. 'So excellent' is acceptable in speech but 'very excellent' or simply 'excellent' fits better in formal register.

× My friends are so social and friendly.

✓ My friends are very sociable and friendly.

Use 'sociable' instead of 'social' to describe people. 'So' is informal; 'very' is preferred for written clarity.

× It's make me over the moon.

✓ It makes me over the moon.

Subject-verb agreement: use third-person singular present 'makes' with subject 'it'. 'Over the moon' is an idiom meaning very happy; keep it but correct verb form.

× Hmm yes I think my school can can make any change to improve my study environment because the facility in my school is not good.

✓ Hmm, yes, I think my school can make some changes to improve the study environment because the facilities in my school are not good.

Avoid repeating 'can'. Use 'make some changes' instead of 'make any change' in affirmative sentences. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' and use plural verb 'are' to agree. Add commas for natural pauses.

× Many toilets was broken.

✓ Many toilets were broken.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense: with plural subject 'toilets' use 'were' not 'was'.

× In the future I have, I have a dream I can come to Baguio University in Vietnam.

✓ In the future I have a dream that I can go to Baguio University in Vietnam.

Remove repetitive 'I have'. Use 'that' to introduce the noun clause. Use 'go to' rather than 'come to' when speaking of future plans to attend a university elsewhere. Maintain future intention with simple present or 'would like to' depending on nuance.

× I think it's one, it's the best school in Vietnam which can start, which can study about technical.

✓ I think it is one of the best schools in Vietnam for studying technical subjects.

Correct structure: 'one of the best schools' requires 'of the' and plural 'schools'. Use 'for studying technical subjects' to express purpose; remove awkward repeated clauses 'which can start, which can study about technical'.