Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, trực tiếp và đúng ngữ pháp. Học sinh nên trả lời trực tiếp (ví dụ: “I am a high school student.”), tránh thông tin thừa hoặc tự đánh giá không cần thiết (“very famous”). Ngoài ra cần dùng thì và cấu trúc đúng (không dùng “Yes I do” trước khi nói mình là học sinh).

Exemplo: I am a high school student. I study at a public school in my hometown.

Sugestão: Cần nói câu ngắn gọn, chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng cấu trúc đúng (present simple) và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể như tên trường hoặc vị trí. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “This name time my high school”.

Exemplo: I study at Zhongshan High School, which is just a 10-minute walk from my house.

Sugestão: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement: “school has”), loại bỏ từ thừa và sắp xếp ý mạch lạc bằng liên từ thích hợp. Nên liệt kê 2-3 lý do cụ thể, mỗi lý do ngắn gọn và có ví dụ minh họa.

Exemplo: Yes, it is. The school has modern facilities like science labs and a computer room, and the teachers are very supportive and give helpful feedback.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và ý chính không cụ thể. Cần bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No and what change), rồi giải thích cụ thể thay đổi mong muốn và lý do. Tránh ngập ngừng và nói lan man.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the school to renovate the library. The current library is small and crowded, so a bigger, quieter study space would help students concentrate.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về kế hoạch học tập trong tương lai và có nhiều ngập ngừng. Hãy nêu mục tiêu rõ ràng (ví dụ: học đại học, chọn ngành), giải thích lý do và kế hoạch cụ thể (học thêm, dự định nộp trường nào). Tránh dùng từ mâu thuẫn như “attend library” và “tedious”.

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to apply to university to study computer science. To prepare, I am taking extra math and programming classes and studying for the university entrance exams.

× Yes I do. I am a student in high school, very famous in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, I am. I am a high school student and my school is very famous in Taiwan.

The original mixes responses and has pronoun/subject clarity issues. Use 'I am' instead of 'Yes I do' for being a student (pronoun and verb choice). Also use a clear subject 'my school' when describing the school's fame. Suggestions: answer the question with the correct verb phrase ('I am') and keep subjects consistent.

× I am studying a high school near my home. This name time my high school because it's near my home.

✓ I study at a high school near my home. It is called [school name] because it is near my home.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'study' for institutions (incorrect preposition). The second sentence is unclear; use 'It is called' to introduce a name (sentence structure and verb usage). Suggestions: say 'I study at' and use 'It is called...' to name the school.

× Of course, my school have a good facilities and good education, more was the the teachers is very friendly and useful.

✓ Of course, my school has good facilities and provides a good education; moreover, the teachers are very friendly and helpful.

Subject-verb agreement: 'school' is singular so use 'has' not 'have'. 'Facilities' is plural, but the verb agrees with the subject 'school'. 'Teachers' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also 'useful' is better replaced with 'helpful' in this context. Suggestions: match singular/plural subjects with correct verb forms and choose appropriate adjectives.

× I have, uh, it's actually this, uh, tallest and, uh, internal library room.

✓ I would like a taller, more modern library room inside the school.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear (sentence structure error). Likely the student meant a taller or larger internal library room; rephrase to 'I would like...' to answer the question about desired changes. Suggestions: form a clear sentence with a subject and verb expressing desire ('I would like') and use comparative/adjective forms correctly.

× I want to attend library because it's a very tedious but uh, the student, uh, often uh, go to library in my high school.

✓ I want to use the library because it is very quiet, and the students often go to the library in my high school.

Use correct verb forms and collocations: 'attend library' is incorrect; use 'use the library' or 'go to the library'. 'Tedious' is wrong word choice for a quiet place; 'quiet' fits context. Subject-verb agreement: 'students... often go' (plural). Suggestions: use correct collocations ('go to the library', 'use the library') and choose appropriate adjective ('quiet' instead of 'tedious').